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this is not you
and
this is not me
it is of itself
the dance
you are feeling
🍃🍃🍃
and as the leaves
were falling
🍃
the afternoon
was autumn and sweet
Published 12th Oct 2016
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12th Oct 2016 9:54pm
Not as sweet as this poem is Pishashee!
Yes it is not the people and indeed it is of itself!! What a brilliant note!!!
Yes it is not the people and indeed it is of itself!! What a brilliant note!!!
13th Oct 2016 4:33am
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13th Oct 2016 9:00am
I really enjoyed this one Dear Heart, it is light and airy and yet complex and deep at the same time - multidimensional!
13th Oct 2016 6:00pm
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14th Oct 2016 5:07am
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Dan, and thank you for such compassion. :) If it were not for that place... I'm sure you understand.
