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In Memory of a Mail Box
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The children have all grown & moved away,
The dedicated parents are retired.
Everyone is green by using email,
Their orders sent to them by Amazon.
And yet the faithful mail box stands guard,
Its colors faded just a little bit.
Here front & center in the couple's yard,
With nothing left inside as days go on.
The daily news, like rolled up tubes, flies by,
The neighbor's dog won't even lift a leg.
The school kids off to class don't turn their heads,
And Dad who trims the hedge just walks away.
But still the mail box alone and proud,
Knows it's a fading breed and waits its turn.
This placed first in the DUP competition "Death of a.....", about an inanimate object.
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The children have all grown & moved away,
The dedicated parents are retired.
Everyone is green by using email,
Their orders sent to them by Amazon.
And yet the faithful mail box stands guard,
Its colors faded just a little bit.
Here front & center in the couple's yard,
With nothing left inside as days go on.
The daily news, like rolled up tubes, flies by,
The neighbor's dog won't even lift a leg.
The school kids off to class don't turn their heads,
And Dad who trims the hedge just walks away.
But still the mail box alone and proud,
Knows it's a fading breed and waits its turn.
This placed first in the DUP competition "Death of a.....", about an inanimate object.
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 28th Sep 2016
| Edited 21st Apr 2018
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Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
28th Sep 2016 3:39am
Loved it when I read it...so glad it took the trophy... Really inventive write...
geoff
geoff
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 10:22am
Thank you, Geoffrey. At the time of its composition it felt so right, and turned out to be a stronger statement with many layers.
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
28th Sep 2016 5:18am
in the unadorned stature of a mailbox we find a reference to men,
grown old & obscure, with no further turns to await.
brings to mind the 'Obsolete' episode on Twilight Zone (Burgess Meredith)...
grown old & obscure, with no further turns to await.
brings to mind the 'Obsolete' episode on Twilight Zone (Burgess Meredith)...
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 10:42am
Thank you for sharing, John. The Muse lead my virtual pen through a layered sweep, but a reader's interpretation can often enrich a write as indeed you have done. To compare anything that includes the consummate actor Burgess Meredith brings honor to my humble expression.
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
28th Sep 2016 5:20am
Jade, you evoke memories of so many things that used to play important roles in our daily lives but now are destined for obsolescence. Brava!
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 10:52am
Thank you so much, dear GW, that means a lot.
You know, when I wrote the piece, j approached it with what I felt was wit. But once it was complete and after several rereads I realized the Muse had lead me to a social commentary.
You know, when I wrote the piece, j approached it with what I felt was wit. But once it was complete and after several rereads I realized the Muse had lead me to a social commentary.
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
Anonymous
28th Sep 2016 5:11pm
Miss Jade(y), CONGRATS on your win of this piece! ... *beautiful* ... love to you ... ~Devlin
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 10:57am
Thank you so very much, dearest Devlin. Your share & express fills my heart!
love,
ever
Jade(y)
love,
ever
Jade(y)
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
28th Sep 2016 5:54pm
This is smart and endearing at the same time... definitely brought a smile to my face :-)
Congratulations on winning the competition!
Congratulations on winning the competition!
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 11:01am
My thanks, lovely Duente! I'm pleased at your "take"on my humble write.
-Jade xo
-Jade xo
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
Anonymous
28th Sep 2016 6:56pm
This is gorgeous ...Jade... I still mail letters. I love stationary. The personal touch of a handwritten letter. Its ,for me, the best way to appreciate someone.
✨Trish
✨Trish
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 11:18am
Ahh, my darling Tish, how you honor me. And I too love stationery. I have a collection from over the years, and of notes and greeting cards too, that are exquisite & unique. I miss the art of writing back & forth with family & friends.
love,
ever
Jade♎️
love,
ever
Jade♎️
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 2:24am
You are word perfect
with such a worthy subject
filled with nostalgia. 📫
Loved reading this, Jade.
with such a worthy subject
filled with nostalgia. 📫
Loved reading this, Jade.
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Re: Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
29th Sep 2016 11:23am
Dear sweet Pish! Thank you for coming by for a read and a share... making it a special moment for me.
always
-Jade xo
always
-Jade xo
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Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
20th Apr 2018 8:26pm
Re. In Memory of a Mail Box
21st Apr 2018 2:57am
Why thank you, Samael, and yes, think about it..,
ever since we all were born, if we take a moment to reminisce in our “back in the day”, we find a bucket list of inanimate objects that have faded from our lives, and wonder why.
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ever since we all were born, if we take a moment to reminisce in our “back in the day”, we find a bucket list of inanimate objects that have faded from our lives, and wonder why.
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