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Not Just One
I am not in the know
of any of you
in the skin
We only know of the other
through our words
To me, this place is sacred
a place where I no longer hide
somewhere that holds
no judgement
Each and every read
of my sick and sometimes
lovely thoughts
makes my heart sing
My poem isnt for just for one
it is for all of you
that claim this place
whatever it may be
A place of escape
and I could only dream
of being half the poets
you all are here
Deep thanks to all
that have read
what this Mysterious Lady
calls nothing but her
mindless thoughts....
( entry in the About Them comp)
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2016 4:11pm
...and the honor is ours MLady, you keep it real and I certainly enjoy your poetry, your presence and witty forum conversations.
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26th Sep 2016 00:31am
Aw, thanks Vee. lol I am not witty at all but as log you think so Ill roll with it. Love you babe. <3
Re. Not Just One
25th Sep 2016 4:59pm
You are a mystery and I love that about you .....
Though I must confess I wish I knew a little more
A fine writer you are !!
Though I must confess I wish I knew a little more
A fine writer you are !!
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26th Sep 2016 00:31am
Thanks, love. Im always around if you dare ask what it is you wonder. <3
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25th Sep 2016 7:40pm
I love your thoughts spread on the page...they are always worth the
read. Much love to you mysterious one.
Keith
read. Much love to you mysterious one.
Keith
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26th Sep 2016 00:33am
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25th Sep 2016 8:43pm
I love your self-awareness and modesty Lady. Still, you're a bit too harsh on yourself.
"Deep thanks to all
that have read
what this Mysterious Lady
calls nothing but her
mindless thoughts..."
Your thoughts are moving, not mindless at all, and I notice a few tears hitting the keyboard. One detail: In the first line of the second stanza you say "scared" when I think you mean "sacred." Other than that nit-picky complaint this is wonderful work. .
"Deep thanks to all
that have read
what this Mysterious Lady
calls nothing but her
mindless thoughts..."
Your thoughts are moving, not mindless at all, and I notice a few tears hitting the keyboard. One detail: In the first line of the second stanza you say "scared" when I think you mean "sacred." Other than that nit-picky complaint this is wonderful work. .
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Thanks honey, sometimes this lady is sleepy...I corrected my mistake. I have been known to add a poem or 2 to the drug section, that could be to blame as well. lol <3
In my defense as being too hard on myself...(like I even need to be defensive, lol) It is what I have grown to live with from choices I have made in life. Hence the space I claim here...I can be whom ever and whatever I want...I love you for your comments, Crow. Thank you honey. <3
In my defense as being too hard on myself...(like I even need to be defensive, lol) It is what I have grown to live with from choices I have made in life. Hence the space I claim here...I can be whom ever and whatever I want...I love you for your comments, Crow. Thank you honey. <3
Re. Not Just One
26th Sep 2016 3:05am
I feel the same way,I never enjoyed reading poetry till I started on DU, luv your "mindless" wonders ML,good luck in the comp.. .
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26th Sep 2016 11:48pm
Re. Not Just One
26th Sep 2016 3:42am
I think of the poets here as part of my community and you are among those I have come to think of as family. A beautiful write mysterious one!
JJ
JJ
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Re. Not Just One
26th Sep 2016 4:21am
May just be my imagination but this reads as if you are doing a swan song. You planning on leaving?
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26th Sep 2016 11:51pm
Even if I tried, JAZZ, I cant walk away from such an awesome place and such great people <3 If I disappear from this place then something is totally wrong, lol. <3
Re. Not Just One
26th Sep 2016 1:36pm
Aaawwww sweetheart as you can see, many adore you n your ink! So the graditude is ours! :)
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Re. Not Just One
26th Sep 2016 4:26pm
I always said this place is like a playground to me. Helps me push myself. Realize who it is I want to be. Your poem was so beautifully said. Awesome job 😁
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 5:58am
I love this. I am such an asshole for having never read tour work before.
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