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Within a Dream
You are a dream that reveals
Itself in oh so many ways...
None of which will I tire of
in the rest of my days...
I hear you in the joyful laughter
and in the silence of the night..
I see you in the cloudless days
and in the brightest moonlight..
I smell the sweet scent of you
in each deep breath that's drawn..
I see and feel the warmth of your
smile within each coming dawn.
I close my eyes and there you are
my every dream come true...
Never in my wildest dreams did
I ever think I'd be gifted you.
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Re. Within a Dream
22nd Sep 2016 7:35pm
Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 3:52am
Re. Within a Dream
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2016 8:52pm
Aww...Keith 💓
This is so very beautiful.
Such a passionate, loving write to your love.
I am so very happy for the both of you.
This is so very beautiful.
Such a passionate, loving write to your love.
I am so very happy for the both of you.

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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 3:54am
Thank you my kind loving
and passionate friend.
I always look forward to
your comments. They are
deeply appreciated.
Loves
Keith
and passionate friend.
I always look forward to
your comments. They are
deeply appreciated.
Loves
Keith
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22nd Sep 2016 9:02pm
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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 3:55am
Re. Within a Dream
This is B eautiful, Exquisite, Superb and Truly adorable Keith!! made my day reading it!!
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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 3:57am
What a wonderful and
all too kind comment
my friend. I am happy
it helped make your day.
Thank you
So much
Keith
all too kind comment
my friend. I am happy
it helped make your day.
Thank you
So much
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
22nd Sep 2016 11:15pm
Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 3:59am
Thank you sweetheart
for your kind words. I
truly appreciate you
taking the time to read.
Keith
for your kind words. I
truly appreciate you
taking the time to read.
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
23rd Sep 2016 1:20am
Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:07am
Lovely and oh so
Mysterious one...
I am so glad that
You thought it
romantic.....
Because I am....hopelessly
Loves
Keith
Mysterious one...
I am so glad that
You thought it
romantic.....
Because I am....hopelessly
Loves
Keith
Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 10:01pm
Re. Within a Dream
23rd Sep 2016 2:23am
Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:09am
Thank you so much
my dearest Brenda.
Your words are so
appreciated.
Love
Keith
my dearest Brenda.
Your words are so
appreciated.
Love
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
23rd Sep 2016 5:21am
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28th Sep 2016 4:10am
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28th Sep 2016 4:26am
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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:15am
I hope to leave these
at your feet until I am..
no more.
Love you
Always
Missing you
terribly
Keith
at your feet until I am..
no more.
Love you
Always
Missing you
terribly
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
24th Sep 2016 00:01am
A fine love poem for the Taryn of your dreams. Nice use of rhythm and rhyme, never forced but organic to the write. It's a sweet thrill to read, a romance of tender reveries. This should melt her heart!
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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:23am
Thank you Sir Crow ..
Your words are always
looked forward to. I hope
that you are correct. She
is a special lady.
Keith
Your words are always
looked forward to. I hope
that you are correct. She
is a special lady.
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
25th Sep 2016 1:00am
Dreams are so beautiful, aren't they? Just like this poem! Beautiful phrasing Keith!
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Re: Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:29am
Yes they are Beautiful Rain..
They certainly are...
I thank you for your
kind words sweet Lady.
Loves
Keith
They certainly are...
I thank you for your
kind words sweet Lady.
Loves
Keith
Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 2:17am
Combines every thing you would find in my poetry in one poem instead of hundreds, which I have not posted.♎
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Re. Within a Dream
28th Sep 2016 4:31am
What a wonderful comment.
Welcome to DUP I hope you
find it a wonderful place to
call home.
Thanks
Keith
Welcome to DUP I hope you
find it a wonderful place to
call home.
Thanks
Keith