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Hardened Need
Those eyes that speak to
me as only hers can....
Awaken my desire and
my growing demand..
Lips that cause me to utter
words of wants and needs.
Lips that cause my lips
to offer my begs and pleads.
She's touched me like no other
so deep within my depths ...
Causing my heart to flutter...
Giving me shortness of breath.
Creating in me such hunger to
taste of her sweet wet flesh..
To slurp and swirl with lips and
tongue in eager hungry press..
Then I'll scribe deeply with smooth
strokes.... bold letters of love..
Written with hardened need and
sharpened wants from above.
me as only hers can....
Awaken my desire and
my growing demand..
Lips that cause me to utter
words of wants and needs.
Lips that cause my lips
to offer my begs and pleads.
She's touched me like no other
so deep within my depths ...
Causing my heart to flutter...
Giving me shortness of breath.
Creating in me such hunger to
taste of her sweet wet flesh..
To slurp and swirl with lips and
tongue in eager hungry press..
Then I'll scribe deeply with smooth
strokes.... bold letters of love..
Written with hardened need and
sharpened wants from above.
Published 24th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2016 6:13pm
Truly beautiful.
What I love about this write...is that deep connection can be felt within your words. It isn't just lust or physical need-- you can feel the pulse of your core in these words.
Love is deeply reflected.
Wonderful ink, my friend. 💓
What I love about this write...is that deep connection can be felt within your words. It isn't just lust or physical need-- you can feel the pulse of your core in these words.
Love is deeply reflected.
Wonderful ink, my friend. 💓
24th Sep 2016 6:40pm
The 'want' perfectly described!
The physical want, but also the emotional want is tangible!
One tiny thing though > I think the 7th line needs to lose "the"
Other then that, brilliant ink!
The physical want, but also the emotional want is tangible!
One tiny thing though > I think the 7th line needs to lose "the"
Other then that, brilliant ink!
24th Sep 2016 7:00pm
She's touched me like no other
so deep within my depths ...
Causing my heart to flutter...
Giving me shortness of breat
Amazing
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
24th Sep 2016 9:15pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
24th Sep 2016 10:21pm
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25th Sep 2016 1:04am
"Creating in me such hunger to
taste of her sweet wet flesh..
To slurp and swirl with lips and
tongue in eager hungry press.." <---Yum! Love the sensual, and vivid description.
Hardened need indeed!:) Sexy Keith!
taste of her sweet wet flesh..
To slurp and swirl with lips and
tongue in eager hungry press.." <---Yum! Love the sensual, and vivid description.
Hardened need indeed!:) Sexy Keith!
25th Sep 2016 2:29am
25th Sep 2016 9:27pm
This is lust, not desire, but it's eloquently stated and skillfully written.
"Then I'll scribe deeply with smooth
strokes.... bold letters of love..
Written with hardened need and
sharpened wants from above."
The need will not be denied. Bold words knot2much!
"Then I'll scribe deeply with smooth
strokes.... bold letters of love..
Written with hardened need and
sharpened wants from above."
The need will not be denied. Bold words knot2much!
25th Sep 2016 11:36pm
