~thief of innocence~

this is heavy stuff Brenda! Yes you've chosen the right category to post in...Love poems.. it is indeed with its sheer intensity! could've easily tempted to post in Dark category..yo are way ahead of anyone's guess/imagination!! gem!

thank you graciously KDAmB :)

love Brenda

It doesn't seem to matter which category you're writing in, you're always breathtaking. You are an amazing soul! And this is a stunning write. :)

thank you beautiful Willow what a lovely comment..

love Crim

Brenda this is so inviting.. As beautiful and alluring as you.
Trish

thank you graciously lovely Trish..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda...this write draws me in with such temptation...intoxicating and stunning is what you are and so are these lines indeed...

"I am the con-artist of morality  
torn from the modest bosoms    
clad in metal chastity belts  
virgin whores  
their locks picked  
with line and verse  
   
tricked out debutante    
lured in  
the dark so seductive  
sweet insanity  
come dear    
get drunk  
off my decadent sin"

I love you so very much!

xoxox Taryn

aw my beautiful one thank you I love you so much..

xo Brenda

Get drunk off my decadent sin > now that's a stunning last line!

Diabolical I am > angelic you are as well... we all have both sides...

Love this write, dear Crim

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende yes we do have both sides :)

love Crim

The temptation of drugs is too strong for many. I hope you're working with some youth program, Brenda. They could use you.  

thank you Sage one maybe someday i'm not up for such a thing at the moment too fresh from the trenches myself..  
 
love Brenda

I see the beauty in your intensity,always shining like a star in the night...

thank you Kasai what a lovely thing to say..

love Crim

Last two lines bring it home .....

thank you Poet I cherish your thoughts..

love Brenda

Dark, wicked....and completely intoxicating.
Brilliant write, Crim 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

outlaw girl, we get to see you in black&white,
leading whore-ful virgins down a stray path.
it's a dark ride, Crim...

thank you John reveling in the night..

love Crim

Aah! Thief of innocence! I know this all to well, 13 yrs a slave to her wickedness and darknessisters. A love hate relationship that my soul got spent and broken. This is a most harshly beautiful write! :)

it is a black path thank you Soul..

love Crim

"rending my veil    
left naked and shivering      
I take in your cold stare      
mirrored in glazed eyes      
are my many faults"  
Our differences are fleeting dear Crim. Pure as always girl. Thank you. xo

thank you Twitch you made my night missed you my friend..

love Crim

Sinful, decadent but still irresistible Lady Crim.  More experience than innocence here and it's intoxicating.  Steals my black crowfly heart, no doubt about it.

thank you for the smiles Sir Crow :)

love Crim

Brenda.. fucking brilliant.. love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave love you my friend..

love Brenda