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Atoms
A Neutron, an electron, and a proton,
all in a field, in approximate symmetry
and there’s deep mysteries
in how they view one another
through extrasensory perception.
Published 21st Sep 2016
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21st Sep 2016 11:39pm
Atoms are the perfect example of many a homes, the proton is bound in the nucleus with a neutral particle yet the one it is attracted to is one revolving around, so near yet so far. I feel for proton for staying positive all the time!
Loved this little gem 💎 Pishashee!
Loved this little gem 💎 Pishashee!
22nd Sep 2016 9:32pm
Such a wonderful comment.
I really needed that positive (+)
you're a gem, thank you..
I really needed that positive (+)
you're a gem, thank you..
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