a date with my dad

Brenda ... Brenda ... Brenda ... now THIS is awesome! ... especially the ending ... I actually teared up because this is not a lucky future I foresee with my father ... we had issues and disturbances but will we have a date in the hereafter:  Perhaps ... But in the mean time, I will envy yours ... thank you, my Queen, for the tear dropped ... love to you, Devlin.

thank you Queen Devlin for feeling the emotion I was trying to convey he showed me a picture well it was the day we were reunited when I was three.. him on bent knee arms outstretched and me running to him.. he showed me that and said it will like that when I see him again..

love you lady..

xo Brenda

That is very sweet. Love the way you put this feeling into words :)

thank you Chaotic for feeling this..

love Crim

Hey Precious Crim......this is too emotional for any words......tears over take me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

aw thank you beautiful Flower loving soul :)

love Crim

So very heartfelt. Words which I deeply understand.
Truly surfaced so many emotions.
Such a beautiful write 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

This is incredibly good. So heart breaking, but loving.

One of your best for sure.

Awesome job 😁

thank you DC what a beautiful thing to say :)

love Crim

A very lovely write,so touching
Another enjoyable read...

thank you beautiful Kasai..

love Crim

wrought with emotion

thank you for feeling it..

love Crim

lovely & poignant, dear crim

aw thank you kindly Daniel :)

love Brenda

My dad was an editor, and one false word brought his fury.  Despite a bit of a temper he was a fine man, and I look forward to meeting him where he might be, offer him some poetry.  Your dad sounds as if he was fascinating.  Any man who can live fast, dust crops and later write has my admiration.  So do you, Crim.  Excellent work!

sounds a little intimidating Sir Crow surely your poetry would make him proud.. thank you for seeing the love I have for my dad..

love Crim

I feel my dad over my shoulder too, in the quiet moments when I need guidance

Thank you for this stunning portrait

I enjoy this personal and intimate side of you  ....

Like

x

thank you Poet yes this is my rarely seen tender side..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, a beautiful and poignant write before us placed so delicately on the page...showing us just how beautiful a soul you are...you are fortunate to have someone watching over you...always know how lucky you are for that.

I love you very much

Xoxo Taryn

thank you my beautiful one I think we all do..

I love you..

xo Brenda

I now have a much better understanding of why you felt my father writes so keenly. I hope you don't mind, but I'm claiming this one for my list and loving it for life. Beautiful,  Brenda, just heart warming and lovely.  :)

thank you lovely Willow yes your writes about cherished memories with your dad move me greatly I deeply appreciate you showing me so much love on mine..

love Brenda

Brenda.. into the list it goes.. i shed a tear.. truly a lovely write.. i love you!! so spirtual .. i know he'll keep his promise.. i just feel it..


Dave

thank you Dave yes I believe he will too :)

love Brenda

Crim! U alright with your passionate truthful understanding words. Keep up the good write.