Evil Bastards

Evil becomes you, my Queen ... It's poems such as these that make me think it's time for me to step down and step out ... love to you & your bitch wicked ink! ... Devlin/TS.

Queen Devlin no one writes like you.. you my love are so uniquely great I need your pen and beautiful spirit..

thank you for gracing my darkened page..

love Brenda

Ahhh, Unveiling, luv ~

Why must it be one or the other? Why not both? I rather like the juxtaposition and wholeness inherent in having both within us: the bitch, the flowery, demons, angels ~ all of it. Evil/Good ~ Meh, we're all comprised of both, luv.

Mayhap, the true task is to accept all the myriad facets of ourselves, understand and accept. Mayhap, there's peace there, eh? ;-* :-*

Lady Savaja your'e so right i'm just struggling to find beauty at the moment it's evading me try as I might.. thank you beautiful one for leaving your calming thoughts of peace..  
 
love Crim

most excellent. love the closing lines

Hades

thank you Darkest Lord..

love Crim

it's better to die a bitch
than live a flowery shit covered lie > I agree with Savaja that we should embrace both, but damn... those lines are killer lines!!!

You nailed this one, dear Crim!
Love, Duende

thank you beautiful Duende I would embrace the lighter side but it's evading me at the moment sigh..

love Crim

I own one of them jackets in that pic. And sometimes I have to get it out, dust off the secrets and madness and just smile....Excellent write. <3

thank you Mysterious one yes there are secrets to be unlocked when in a donning a straight jacket ;)

love Crim

"hate me yessssss  
it's better to die a bitch  
than live a flowery, shit covered lie  "

My thoughts exactly, malady. We are all bitches and bastards.
Love this...Brenda
Trish

thank you beautiful Trish..

love Brenda

thank you graciously..

love Crim

Mind-bending, consciousness-shifting, vivid, visceral! Your work is so intense!! Love it! Keep doing what you do! You are one of a kind for sure!  

aw thank you most kindly :)

love Crim

I love the little monsters escaping from the laboratory of your mind... let them live a while

thank AKM yes I think I shall ;)

love Crim

There's an "i'm" that needs capitalising, I'm not sure of the use of using more than one "s" in "yes", and I really feel the piece would be a lot more effective without the horror movie image beside it, but I liked this poem. It's a fun, dark, angry, and abstract rendering of the creative process and the difficult emotional states it creates as well as evokes. Thank you for the read. - Jack xxx

thank you Jack for visiting my pages i'm still up in the air on the pic I may remove it I kind of wondered the same thing when I posted it.. thank you for a wonderful critique..

love Brenda

The ending .....is perfection.
Love this dark masterpiece 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda.....this is fucking incredible....this is my fierce Crim showing her face and you better be damned proud of her...many are going to embrace you (if they know not of you) and this write....a masterpiece! I may need to log into "stuck" to get it in a Reading List! Dammit! Love, love, love!!!

I love you so very much!!!
xoxox Taryn

aw beautiful one you've made my week I love you so much :)

xo Brenda

I with covetousness hope that you don't mind
me commenting Brenda, but I had to... some
things in us never die and only gain the
supremacy over everything else.

But, this write upon reading it made me feel
your Mastery.

  Pan

aw Pan I love you commenting my friend..

thank you so much..

love Brenda

I love the bitch in you Crim, and your words can attack me anytime.  I'm ready!  

aw thank you Sir Crow though I would never seek to bite you with my words..

love Crim

I like the sultry darkness in this. When the demon comes to play... No bars held.

I like the image, so I'm disagreeing with Jack on that. But you definitely want to capitize the "I'm" there is nothing submisive about the narrator in this case...

I also think the ssss is over done on the "yes"

But the art in this is the straight unflowered language that hits the reader from the first word... Nice work Brenda

thank you AL for such a wonderful comment.. I made the changes.. i'm currently searching that pic and can't find it now if I can i'll put it back up I thought it went perfectly with the write..

love Brenda

Brenda.. speechless.. truly brilliant ink.. into my list it goes.. love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave i'm honored..

love Brenda