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~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Your skin
touches
broken porcelain pieces
of my life; mending them
Your tongue lingers
in my mouth
sharing breath
like a Tango
in the sunset
Your heartbeat lives in my veins
an eternal pulse
The buds that bloom
hearing your voice
-x-
Singing delicate notes
in the garden
at midnight
a lonesome blood orchid
dances in the wind
Opening petals
to your tender caress
shattering darkness
the breaking dawn of amour
Falling in your embrace
tracing fingers along your spine
inking out my verse
in hieroglyphics
Knowing you
before light separated night
An ancient love
-x-
Birds sing!
Trees blossom
Roses awake
in enthusiastic excitement
hearing
the wind whispering
subtle secrets of love
etched in broken lives
of cold concrete walls
in temples of doom
-x-
Shaking foundations
though our affections
Traversed through centuries unchanged
Our eyes veiled
in ravenous passion
Tasting each other
as new suns rise
rivers of ecstasy flow
two become one
-x-
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Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 6:11pm
It was an absolute honour working with you on this piece Brenda... Thank you so much for the oportunity.
Love @ you
Al -x-
Love @ you
Al -x-
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 6:18pm
you are a true dream to create with Al thank you from my heart you made my week..
love you :)
xo Brenda
love you :)
xo Brenda
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 6:33pm
This is so very beautiful, so passionate. The depths of love can be felt in these words.
Breathtaking ink 💓
Breathtaking ink 💓
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16th Sep 2016 1:17am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 6:38pm
I would love to shower you with the beautiful words this more than deserves, but I'm at a loss for words with it. Gorgeous, so deep and soul-touching.
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:19am
thank you beautiful Willow i'm deeply indebted to my fellow poet Al for his editing and writing skills..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 6:39pm
What a delightful surprise filled with a nostalgic history and beautiful imagery.
Well done you two.
Well done you two.
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16th Sep 2016 1:19am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 7:07pm
Malady... you're always a timeliness read. Exquisitely penned.
✨Trish
✨Trish
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:20am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 7:16pm
*Wow*, and I shall christen thee Miss Crim: ``The Queen of Collab``. . .Awesome you two!. . .And believe it or not, I can`t even begin to decipher which piece belongs to whom?. . .That`s how well this was cleverly mastered!. . .Love to you, My Queen of Darkness and to My Rev AL. . .~Devlin.
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:24am
thank you graciously from us both Queen Devlin Al is a master writing partner and editor..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 7:20pm
god's tits, ya'll
i absolutely love this creation
... the language is
spellbinding
xoxox
i absolutely love this creation
... the language is
spellbinding
xoxox
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:22am
thank you from us both beautiful Katja I owe Al much of the credit do to his skills in writing and editing..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:22am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
What a poem, Brenda is as perfect as it is possible to be perfect.
Your words are so inspirational and there is love within every
darn line. Fantastic!
Your words are so inspirational and there is love within every
darn line. Fantastic!
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16th Sep 2016 1:24am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
15th Sep 2016 11:13pm
My pen bow down to you two. This was absolutely fucking amazing! I didn't want this to end. Your lines flowed effortless together.
Well done Crim and Al.
Pen Salute~
Well done Crim and Al.
Pen Salute~
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 1:25am
thank you from us both beautiful Rain Al is a true poetic master..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 2:25am
Dear Crim,
This is such an enchanting piece, it breathes... hope!
The words flow so easily into eachother as if it is written by one!
Love, Duende
This is such an enchanting piece, it breathes... hope!
The words flow so easily into eachother as if it is written by one!
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 11:13am
thank you graciously from us both lovely Duende it flows as one because AL is a genius editor..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 3:19am
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17th Sep 2016 11:15am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 4:19am
This was seamless and absolutely beautiful write. Two very talented writers that danced together in perfect step. Bravo
Keith
Keith
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 11:15am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 11:18am
Dddaaaayyyuummnnn this was a bbeeeeaaaauuuutttiiifffuullll ink!!
Wow... Big UPs to you both! :)
Wow... Big UPs to you both! :)
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17th Sep 2016 11:16am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
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16th Sep 2016 12:22pm
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17th Sep 2016 11:16am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
16th Sep 2016 10:56pm
There is love after death. Even "cold concrete walls" and "temples of doom" can't contain it. Fine work, which I take to be about love's triumphant immortality. Bravo to you both!
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17th Sep 2016 11:17am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 5:59am
I honestly don't know what to say.......kind of speechless.
Cannot believe how many beautiful lines there were.
An amazing duet.....
Cannot believe how many beautiful lines there were.
An amazing duet.....
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 11:18am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 11:33am
'before light separated night'
as lovers long separated enjoin
in their conspiracy of passion.
Crim, you take a lover & make exquisite erotica...
as lovers long separated enjoin
in their conspiracy of passion.
Crim, you take a lover & make exquisite erotica...
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
17th Sep 2016 11:58am
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Anonymous
17th Sep 2016 12:03pm
Brenda.. damn.. nice collab.. both of you really knocked this out of the park..
Dave
Dave
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17th Sep 2016 4:34pm
Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
Anonymous
19th Sep 2016 4:38am
What an amazing piece created by the two of you My Beautiful Brenda...pen respect for stealing my breath throughout so many lines...well done!!!!
I love you!
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you!
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. ~Timeless Requiem~with The Talented RevolutionAL
19th Sep 2016 11:03am
thank you graciously from us both beautiful one..
it was great fun writing with AL :)
I love you..
xo Brenda
it was great fun writing with AL :)
I love you..
xo Brenda