fucked

some lights shine annoyingly brighter than others. I can relate to this big time, lovely Crim. <3

they sure can lovely Mysterious one thank you love..

xo Crim

This fucked me in a painfully sad way... I hate to know you hurt so much sweetie. :(

aw Poe just feeling out of place and tempted not so bad thank you..

love Crim

down & dirty. sometimes poetry needs to be harsh
to be heard & understood.
it's hardcore, & no less poetry.
you can be rugged, Crim...

thank you John just saying how i'm feeling sometimes it's all I can do..

love Crim

Darkly sexy! Had to look up a few words! That's always a plus for me when reading! Nice work!

thank you you made me smile :)

love Crim

sweet bio.....

shadows & clouds are better for the Eyes than all that glaring fckn bluesky sunny'shine

bless ye, dear

thank you Daniel indeed :)

love Brenda

You've done it before and you can do it Brenda..this too shall pass, just hold on tight.  My thoughts are with you, hugzz

thank you lovely Rina..

love Brenda

thank you beautiful Lily just out of my comfort zone these days..

love Crim

You are what you are . . . Don't understand why you feel
the need to fuck yourself in the ass and tell the world that
you are one fucked up goddamn whoring bitch. I don't know
if you will allow me to comment anymore. I like you. I understand
your problem, at least if all you say is upfront and true.
Sometimes I feel you just need to SHOCK!

I sincerely hope you are permitted to continue to comment here, your comment was a honest account of your opininion. Similarly the poetess wrote an expression of self hate and defeat. I have read the piece and concluded that nowhere does she imply fiction or non fiction. I have read millions of fictional poems. For that reason I feel that her self hate piece is indeed nestled in the underground not a Disney  movie. Maybe the world needs more poets who express the self hate and depression issues through thier craft and art. It would be rather irresponsible to attempt to shut up a voice for people who suffer in this way. Thank you for hearing my opinion, and considering that this art form is about being human not about hiding topics that may offend sensitive viewers.

thank you AL for stating so perfectly what I could not.. you're right if i'm going to post these type of poems I should let people comment honestly..  
 
love Brenda

Polite => politic => politician => deceitful piece of shit. Do you really want to be friends with the polite people?

lol thank you AKM great way of seeing things no I don't..

love Crim

Sometimes the sun itself burns too brightly and the shadows are our only solace.
Beautiful poetry can be found in those shadows,Crimsin....

thank you lovely Kasai what a beautiful way of seeing things..

love Crim

Seeing the ugly of ones self is something i do myself.
This was beautifully written Crim ^^

thank you DC :)

love Crim

phenomenal sign off - the light as torture

Unique vision

thank you Whale I cherish your thoughts..

love Crim

thank you Todski I always over word and over paint when I create hopefully I will get a keener eye for edit with time..

love Brenda

yes please Todksi I really struggle at editing without chopping the whole poem making appear a stunted tree lol..

thank you..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, there is beauty even in the ugly of things...light is always found through the strength you always show within your life and displayed before us with these writes....honored to have you share your "all" with us...I love you so very much!!

xoxoxoxox Taryn

thank you my beautiful one for showing love to all sides of me :)

I love you so much..

xo Brenda

I hope you find your way to the shadows Crim.  There's comfort to be found there, and plenty of admirers.  Fine work!    

thank you Sir Crow here I shelter in the shade :)

love Crim

you have never pulled punches,
you are simply raw on the page
bleeding yourself dry for art
or catharsis...
... it is why
i love you so
xo

thank you beautiful one I love you..

xo Brenda

thank you Todski I see your point you are so bloody fantastic at editing I hope to get better at it..

love Brenda

Brenda.. i love your heart.. raw and honest.. yet filled with love.. love you my sister..



Dave

thank you Dave my brother..

love Brenda