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Writer Block
A stumblingblock
Lain before my pen
It will not weep
I cannot paint
My alaphabet is broken
A blank wall of white
Is all I seem to conjur.
Lain before my pen
It will not weep
I cannot paint
My alaphabet is broken
A blank wall of white
Is all I seem to conjur.
Published 14th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2016 10:32am
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15th Sep 2016 7:49am
Indeed it will, I just usually can shake writers block very easily, it has been a prolonged case this time.
Thank you for the read and comment!
~anonshadow😏
Thank you for the read and comment!
~anonshadow😏
14th Sep 2016 1:15pm
I agree with Nemo Omen.When words seem to disappear simply stop.Most poems are too long and many over-egged . . . . . leave the reader to add to your writing by giving the reader space I rarely make public judgements and when I do I treat the poem as two halves . . . . .the poem ( its construction ) and the subject which has little to do with me being entirely the choice of the writer.Should I wish to comment I do this privately; perhaps setting up a dialogue.I like this little poem it has a message more than many poems convey
15th Sep 2016 7:56am
Thank you Kexby for your input, I greatly appreciate it. Could've knocked me over with a feather when I saw you commented on of one of my pieces. I am glad you enjoyed it!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
15th Sep 2016 10:17am
You should not have been surprised at my comments.This is a good poem which I enjoyed. Keep in touch Greyshadow.
15th Sep 2016 10:20am
15th Sep 2016 2:03am
15th Sep 2016 7:57am
Thank you Writer23, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
15th Sep 2016 8:48am
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15th Sep 2016 9:49am
Yup it is the only way to move passed it I suppose. Glad you liked it, always great when you stop by!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
30th Sep 2016 9:58pm
Well, I don't think it could have been more perfectly nor succinctly put. The anguish of all that empty space. So sadly familiar. Great write.
1st Oct 2016 8:34am
Thank you, I am very glad you thought so. Writers block sucks, no doubt about it. Always appreciate you reading my stuff and leaving your thoughts.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
14th Jan 2017 8:08am
is this writers block a trojan horse? because it comes out of nowhere... on the hand you came with this while experiencing it!!! you're good at this
15th Jan 2017 5:42am
Well, thank you for saying so! I was just so discouraged because of my writer's block I was going through that I decided to use it to write something. It broke me out of it, oddly enough. Appreciate you reading!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
15th Jan 2017 9:32am
hmmm interesting point, i never used it to write something. thanks you for this teaching...
