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HALO
Our halos are the mouths of volcanos
The confluence of sacrifice salvia and saliva
Quake become genie break be yogini
For those that dream while awake
Whirl the whole wide world
Welcome to your life
Here no failure is terminal
No success eternal
Welcome to deep greens lime lit
Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing
Our words gallow our crimes
Our breath is Ki
Be poplar not popular
Upright and reaching to the heavens
And love like a dervish
For our lives depend on this
That you know that you are love
And all is love
So that love can not seem undone
The confluence of sacrifice salvia and saliva
Quake become genie break be yogini
For those that dream while awake
Whirl the whole wide world
Welcome to your life
Here no failure is terminal
No success eternal
Welcome to deep greens lime lit
Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing
Our words gallow our crimes
Our breath is Ki
Be poplar not popular
Upright and reaching to the heavens
And love like a dervish
For our lives depend on this
That you know that you are love
And all is love
So that love can not seem undone
Published 3rd Sep 2016
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3rd Sep 2016 3:22pm
I love this because it embodies the essence of Love, far-reaching and beyond ourselves or one person of focus.
It's a galaxy of creation from the super nova of Source. One to look upon and behold the beauty whether day or
night. Something to remind us of where we came from and where we'll return.
It's a galaxy of creation from the super nova of Source. One to look upon and behold the beauty whether day or
night. Something to remind us of where we came from and where we'll return.
3rd Sep 2016 4:34pm
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3rd Sep 2016 3:41pm
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3rd Sep 2016 9:29pm
3rd Sep 2016 7:31pm
Beautiful and penetrating thoughts on the nature of our lives and our loves. I especially enjoy where you said, Kiss like cake and movies. I love this.
3rd Sep 2016 9:30pm
Anonymous
4th Sep 2016 2:53am
"And love like a dervish
For our lives depend on this
know that you are love
And all is love
So that love can not seem undone"
Your words throughout this have calmed myself. If I may, I finally must say , I understand myself.
Truly you have conveyed to me. What in reality is the most important thing we can ever learn. Love all.
Thank you.
Trish
For our lives depend on this
know that you are love
And all is love
So that love can not seem undone"
Your words throughout this have calmed myself. If I may, I finally must say , I understand myself.
Truly you have conveyed to me. What in reality is the most important thing we can ever learn. Love all.
Thank you.
Trish
4th Sep 2016 5:11am
so true Trish - the greatest words Nat King Cole ever sung was to love and be loved in return
4th Sep 2016 4:11am
Welcome to your life
Here no failure is terminal
No success eternal > this took my breath away for a moment!
Such a deep and profound piece!
Thank you for sharing... I needed to read this...
Here no failure is terminal
No success eternal > this took my breath away for a moment!
Such a deep and profound piece!
Thank you for sharing... I needed to read this...
4th Sep 2016 5:18am
the only constant here is change and sometimes that is the only hope we have and sometimes as we wave upon the "stage" before the applause we forget how momentary that is too and that this too will pass
Anonymous
4th Sep 2016 6:21am
Truly love this profound piece.
My favorite portion:
"Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing
Our words gallow our crimes "
To be free, and live in that very embrace.
Brilliant ink 💓
My favorite portion:
"Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing
Our words gallow our crimes "
To be free, and live in that very embrace.
Brilliant ink 💓
4th Sep 2016 11:52am
yes nothing that shackles - this is YOUR life and if you're reading this then it's because your privileged enough to live it
Thanks Within really great to have you here
Thanks Within really great to have you here
4th Sep 2016 7:07am
4th Sep 2016 11:53am
Hey Rose - thanks for the inspiring note - much appreciated -,good to see u again
4th Sep 2016 4:23pm
Beautiful, Whale;
what a great write...
Favorite lines
"Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing"
Wonderful :)
what a great write...
Favorite lines
"Be selfish as a saint
Kiss like cake and movies
Label nothing"
Wonderful :)
4th Sep 2016 5:48pm
4th Sep 2016 10:27pm
That's fantastic, and I wouldn't miss your journey for the world, we've come far in not knowing where we're going, except somewhere where the leaves are gold in sunshine and the color is of the air and the breeze a fine wine ...at least that's the way I feel sometimes, I'm one day behind you whale! :D its been so much fun, and so thank your for your energy, and from the bottom of my heart, thank you for your good friendship.
5th Sep 2016 1:50am
4th Sep 2016 8:57pm
Last three lines are kickass lines . . . eh . . .
the rest of the poem ain't bad either . . .
the rest of the poem ain't bad either . . .
5th Sep 2016 1:50am
5th Sep 2016 8:58am
words gallow crime, crime leads to the gallows;
funny how a noose resembles a halo...
funny how a noose resembles a halo...
5th Sep 2016 9:44am
28th Sep 2016 7:39am
on the lines
& between the lines,
this esoteric write
is steeped in profundity
much loved, whale
xo
& between the lines,
this esoteric write
is steeped in profundity
much loved, whale
xo
28th Sep 2016 7:52am
