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CONFLAGRATION
,
Today
Is fucking hot
The way the moist walls
Are closing in on me
The way
My skull's pinched plates
Their tectonic shifts
Carried on molten waves
And yet
When night time peaks
Unmercifully
My cage will rage endless
And summer
Will insist to
Bring your heat inside
To mix with my lava
Almost
Unbearable
The overflow churns
And gushes from your force
Pulsing
Culls its way through
My steaming tunnels
To rush from ev'ry hole
The night
Yet to cool
This intensity
That threatens to erupt.
.
Today
Is fucking hot
The way the moist walls
Are closing in on me
The way
My skull's pinched plates
Their tectonic shifts
Carried on molten waves
And yet
When night time peaks
Unmercifully
My cage will rage endless
And summer
Will insist to
Bring your heat inside
To mix with my lava
Almost
Unbearable
The overflow churns
And gushes from your force
Pulsing
Culls its way through
My steaming tunnels
To rush from ev'ry hole
The night
Yet to cool
This intensity
That threatens to erupt.
.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 15th Aug 2016
| Edited 10th Jul 2018
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Re. CONFLAGRATION
Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 1:36am
What a hot poem, wow. I can feel the humidity in your walls. Well, actually my walls get like that too when it's been hot all day when I come home from work. I will pray for hot weather then Jade, should we ever meet up. ;-)
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Re: Re. CONFLAGRATION
15th Aug 2016 8:20pm
Thank you so much, hey, it's been a while! lol, No need to pray for that, not where I live, cause even winter betrays us.☀️
Re. CONFLAGRATION
The tortuous heat of day leads to night's heat of different tortures...
I hope you get the resolutions to both... Excellent writing, jadey
I hope you get the resolutions to both... Excellent writing, jadey
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16th Aug 2016 4:09am
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16th Aug 2016 4:16am
Thank you, dear, for the read and share.
And warm greet and welcome to DUP!
-Jade
And warm greet and welcome to DUP!
-Jade
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16th Aug 2016 4:21am
I thank you for the honor, Nemo, to be compared to Bjork's style. I've adored and admired her for years.
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16th Aug 2016 8:04pm
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16th Aug 2016 9:02pm
Once again you give me fever Jade. Night falls, but that doesn't lower it in the slightest.
'And you
Will insist to
Bring your heat inside
To mix with my lava "
This is fine erotica and a most satisfying read. Krakatoa's got nothing on you.
'And you
Will insist to
Bring your heat inside
To mix with my lava "
This is fine erotica and a most satisfying read. Krakatoa's got nothing on you.
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17th Aug 2016 1:55pm
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17th Aug 2016 3:54am
MMmhhmm my honey!
wow, I love seeing you
let go, you're beautiful
multi'hued,
j'adore toi, beaute..
-Howlings
wow, I love seeing you
let go, you're beautiful
multi'hued,
j'adore toi, beaute..
-Howlings
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17th Aug 2016 2:29pm
Ahh dearest Howlings, thank you so much for your embrace of my érotique révéler!
toujours
Jade xo
toujours
Jade xo
Re. CONFLAGRATION
24th Aug 2016 6:52am
The heat drives us all wild. What you penned here is great. Those first 2 stanzas really grabbed me and then the story just blossomed in an intense, hot and humid way. Clever writing.
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24th Aug 2016 9:09am
Why thank you so much, HW, I appreciate that,
And welcome to DUP, I'm Jade.
And welcome to DUP, I'm Jade.