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Steps Within👣
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The path that we've begun to walk
Is miles apart from you and I
Yet doesn't seem so far at all
as distant constellations lie
With arcing limbs across the night
With linking grasps of matter dark
For us to see by infrared
The healing glow that comes to us
Exchanged by spirit's loving touch
Upon us each our finger prints
And on the path we leave the sign
Of feet that step in tandem rhyme.
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( for Trisha aka Forgotten_Mom71 )
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The path that we've begun to walk
Is miles apart from you and I
Yet doesn't seem so far at all
as distant constellations lie
With arcing limbs across the night
With linking grasps of matter dark
For us to see by infrared
The healing glow that comes to us
Exchanged by spirit's loving touch
Upon us each our finger prints
And on the path we leave the sign
Of feet that step in tandem rhyme.
👣👣
( for Trisha aka Forgotten_Mom71 )
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 18th Aug 2016
| Edited 18th Feb 2017
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Re. Steps Within👣
Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 6:16am
You are going to make me cry. This is beautiful Jade. I am honored...
Speechless full of tears.
Thank you my friend.
Always 👣👣Trisha
Speechless full of tears.
Thank you my friend.
Always 👣👣Trisha
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18th Aug 2016 6:21am
It's my deep honor and happiness that this came to me with feelings for what you do, and a humble gift in love and friendship.
alway
Jadey
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alway
Jadey
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Re. Steps Within👣
18th Aug 2016 7:52am
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19th Aug 2016 2:17am
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18th Aug 2016 8:32am
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19th Aug 2016 2:20am
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18th Aug 2016 9:36am
beautiful. the rhythm in this never falters,
makes it easy to march to...
makes it easy to march to...
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19th Aug 2016 2:22am
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19th Aug 2016 2:29am
Thank you dear Ahavati... it sought me out and birthed itself on the page.
ever
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ever
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18th Aug 2016 12:19pm
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19th Aug 2016 2:31am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 12:53pm
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19th Aug 2016 2:33am
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18th Aug 2016 1:39pm
Beautiful penned expressions of two hearts soulfull connection. Masterful work😉😉
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19th Aug 2016 2:36am
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18th Aug 2016 11:02pm
This is an inspired celebration of friendship, still strong despite what might be considerable distance.
"Yet doesn't seem so far at all
as distant constellations lie "
Stellar work from a fine poet and loyal friend.
"Yet doesn't seem so far at all
as distant constellations lie "
Stellar work from a fine poet and loyal friend.
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19th Aug 2016 2:40am
Thank you so much, my crowfly friend, who also shines in his own skills and loyalties.
ever
Jadey👣
ever
Jadey👣
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19th Aug 2016 00:53am
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19th Aug 2016 2:46am
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19th Aug 2016 5:11am
So quietly poignant, rhythmically sedate, lyrically penned and perfectly shaped... A joined stroll in your mutual presence...
Maestra!
geoff
Maestra!
geoff
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Re. Steps Within👣
19th Aug 2016 7:53am
Thank you so much, Geoffrey...
and an honor to receive such an exclamation, something I always wanted to be, and sometimes I was.
pebble👣
and an honor to receive such an exclamation, something I always wanted to be, and sometimes I was.
pebble👣
Re. Steps Within👣
19th Aug 2016 9:28pm
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19th Aug 2016 9:44pm
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27th Aug 2016 10:45pm
I read this before and liked it but today it touches me deeply. Very nice feeling indeed!
JJ
JJ
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28th Aug 2016 00:19am