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Rainbow Of Luv
"a rainbow in the darkness of a storm"
such a beautiful promise of luv
gleaming across dark weeping clouds
a visual that only sacred hearts can see
before you I stand baring naked heart and soul
feeling your kisses with each drop of falling rain
soothing this weary spirit along its stormy path
reaching to heaven to feel your smile
as lightning crackles and thunder vibrates
emotions of passion deep within me
how comforting is our luv in the midst of a storm
that rages thru our lives time to time
and when it's over we still hold each other ever near
seeing our rainbow promise of everlasting luv
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
such a beautiful promise of luv
gleaming across dark weeping clouds
a visual that only sacred hearts can see
before you I stand baring naked heart and soul
feeling your kisses with each drop of falling rain
soothing this weary spirit along its stormy path
reaching to heaven to feel your smile
as lightning crackles and thunder vibrates
emotions of passion deep within me
how comforting is our luv in the midst of a storm
that rages thru our lives time to time
and when it's over we still hold each other ever near
seeing our rainbow promise of everlasting luv
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 10th Aug 2016
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Scrumptious are the words and emotion which inspired this poem, flower. Great visual!
11th Aug 2016 2:20am
Hey SG......what awesome words you describe my ink as......I'm very honored you liked this so well......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Aug 2016 5:46pm
11th Aug 2016 2:20am
Hey 23.......you always make me smile.......thank you for your support......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Aug 2016 7:24pm
'''''''heart and >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>soul''''''
are ur rainbows
we bow
to thee
flowery
are ur rainbows
we bow
to thee
flowery
11th Aug 2016 2:24am
Thank you Again.......you've brought a smile to me......truly honored by your words......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
12th Aug 2016 3:07am
sincerity always pays
and that's why
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from you also come
my ways
read my small one latest
just posted as u r on line flowery
and that's why
comments
from you also come
my ways
read my small one latest
just posted as u r on line flowery
14th Aug 2016 2:02am
Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 10:01pm
Such a beautiful piece, Sweet Flower💓
Very heartfelt.
Very heartfelt.
11th Aug 2016 2:25am
Hi Heart.......I always appreciate your graceful smile upon my ink......I'm glad you liked it......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 10:59pm
The beauty and the anger of love is all here in this piece.
11th Aug 2016 2:26am
Hi London......I'm thrilled you have smiled upon my ink.......glad you enjoyed it......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Aug 2016 11:41pm
before you I stand baring naked heart and soul. Wow I resonate with that. Enjoyed this elemental write.
11th Aug 2016 2:30am
Hi DC......thank you for the "WOW".......I'm glad it resonates with you......this felt awesome to write during an actual storm......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Aug 2016 00:09am
11th Aug 2016 2:31am
Gentle Soul......glad you smiled upon this ink......holly you enjoyed it......thank you.....honored for the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo
11th Aug 2016 2:47am
lovely Flower you write such beauty from deep with your soul so touching is your ink :)
love Crim
love Crim
11th Aug 2016 2:54am
Awe Crim......you always send such good vibes upon my soul.......thrilled you felt this with me......thank you my precious friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Aug 2016 6:55am
This is so beautiful Flowergirl... Imagery and verbiage merged in sweet matrimony. ..
12th Aug 2016 2:43am
Hey Naajir......I'm very pleased you enjoyed this......I always enjoy your smile upon my ink......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Aug 2016 8:19pm
You provide a comfort and thrill at the same time, quite a prize at the end of the rainbow Flower.
" before you I stand baring naked heart and soul
feeling your kisses with each drop of falling rain
soothing this weary spirit along its stormy path"
I read this and my weariness does get a lift even in the middle of this f-ing drought. Thanks Flower!
" before you I stand baring naked heart and soul
feeling your kisses with each drop of falling rain
soothing this weary spirit along its stormy path"
I read this and my weariness does get a lift even in the middle of this f-ing drought. Thanks Flower!
12th Aug 2016 3:41am
Hey Crow......well you know my rainbow has extra bright purple.......color of passion.......yes yes....wonderful prize at the end of the rainbow.......soft bed of purple petals......soft music.......light rain kisses and a smiling me......perfect I would say......☺️ Drought?? Wish I could send some of this rain to you cause we have more than we need that's for sure......some here aren't straight from the 20 inches we got in October......haven't dried out since......wishing you safety and well......thank you for your always touching comment.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 3:27am
Flower, this is so promising and hopeful....a love that transcends every battle and every storm to reach the end of the road, the rainbow.. is a love thats meant to be, true love.
12th Aug 2016 3:48am
HI Vee......thank you for your wonderful words.......it's a beautiful feeling to know real luv and not doubt the other person will be with you thru it all......no matter the storm or strife you're always holding hearts.......not only in a relationship but friendships too......appreciate your thought provoking words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Aug 2016 3:18am
14th Aug 2016 2:04am
Faith my precious friend.......thank you for smiling upon my ink......glad you enjoyed....always great to see you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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14th Aug 2016 2:06am
Hey Kasupuu......I'm so thrilled to see you smiling upon my page once again......I'm honored.....thank you for leaving me cherished words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Aug 2016 4:38pm
18th Aug 2016 5:30pm
Thank you Whale......you're such a blessing to smile upon my ink.......here's to a rainbow shining down on you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Sep 2016 3:27am
The imagery in this one is beautiful, paints a great picture in my mind :-)
I also see a shared love for storms, thunder & lightning and rainbows... I can't help but smile when someone writes about them!
I also see a shared love for storms, thunder & lightning and rainbows... I can't help but smile when someone writes about them!
12th Sep 2016 4:25am
Hi Duende.......you so make me smile.......I really enjoyed writing this one.......I'm glad you enjoyed just as much......nature speaks the most enchanting luv if only we take time to listen to the rumbles.......thank you for smiling upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
