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~the love game~
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chilling me with your arrogance
I shiver like a prepubescent girl
unsure of myself when you're near
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lips quivering when we speak
what is this power you wield?
casting a spell over my mind
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you're a cruel beast
Sadistic watching me twist in the wind
crawling to you on hands and knees
tasting your approval I convulse with pleasure
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then just as fast you pull away
leaving me holding my heart in hand
I'm not what you need or desire
and yet there is something that draws us
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maybe just a love of a poetic groupie
feeding your ego
as you ascend to greatness
I'm left cum spattered a plaything
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~I'm weary of the game are you?
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Re. ~the love game~
Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 7:05am
May I quote "~ I'm weary of the game are you?" I am Brenda, truly worn. Thank you.I was searching for how I feel right now. You hit with those words.
Trish
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9th Aug 2016 7:37am
thank you lovely Trish feeling for your heart that you too feel this way hugs..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~the love game~
9th Aug 2016 9:09am
The mix up emotions are on point with this read. How easy it can be seduced by the power of the pen. As for the last line. There's nothing wrong with being weary hopefully it'll help us to discover what we really want out of life and who we want in it.
Samantha🤗
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9th Aug 2016 6:28pm
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 12:38pm
This is painful. The pulse of your heart, beats in these words.
I know the game you speak of. It is one I chose long ago...never to play again. When the heart becomes entangled, twisted, and cut...it becomes messy. Which is when my white surrender flag went up, and I tagged out.
A very passionate piece, Sweet Crim.
Capturing every word and emotion...perfectly. 💓
I know the game you speak of. It is one I chose long ago...never to play again. When the heart becomes entangled, twisted, and cut...it becomes messy. Which is when my white surrender flag went up, and I tagged out.
A very passionate piece, Sweet Crim.
Capturing every word and emotion...perfectly. 💓
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9th Aug 2016 6:29pm
Re. ~the love game~
9th Aug 2016 2:13pm
Your words took me to a place of deep emotion. Well written... And always authentic hugs from me to you.😘
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9th Aug 2016 3:05pm
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9th Aug 2016 6:31pm
Re. ~the love game~
9th Aug 2016 3:25pm
Depth and truth seek themselves
amid the repetitive mundane of
patterns that are no longer useful
to our lives. You are growing,
evolving, changing - and with that
comes a new heart shedding its skin
seeking new direction and meaning.
Lovely write, Brenda.
amid the repetitive mundane of
patterns that are no longer useful
to our lives. You are growing,
evolving, changing - and with that
comes a new heart shedding its skin
seeking new direction and meaning.
Lovely write, Brenda.
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9th Aug 2016 6:32pm
thank you Sage one I hope I'm growing I feel myself slipping and sliding in the mire at times..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~the love game~
9th Aug 2016 3:55pm
a very intense passionate piece, and one that i think many people can relate to all too-well (myself included)
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9th Aug 2016 6:32pm
Re. ~the love game~
9th Aug 2016 4:07pm
You have a mighty way with words, my friend . . .
"maybe just a love of a poetic groupie
feeding your ego"
Yes. Yes! I have been there. Done that.
"maybe just a love of a poetic groupie
feeding your ego"
Yes. Yes! I have been there. Done that.
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Re. ~the love game~
10th Aug 2016 4:51am
that leaves me wondering if we ever get tired of it;
neither the abuser nor the abused, I think.
but you do have a choice, Crim...
neither the abuser nor the abused, I think.
but you do have a choice, Crim...
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11th Aug 2016 9:02am
it's a tough call John because when I think I've had enough he shows me his kinder side..
thank you your thoughts are cherished..
love Crim
thank you your thoughts are cherished..
love Crim
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10th Aug 2016 11:01am
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11th Aug 2016 9:04am
thank you Todski alas I'm on the fence again..
just a friend and poet :)
love Crim
just a friend and poet :)
love Crim
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2016 3:15am
Precious Crim......I so feel this more than my words can express.......this is a part of me that will always haunt my heart.......sending tears with my luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2016 6:17pm
Brenda.. so heartfelt, and filled with passion.. i just adore you, and your work.. love always..
Dave
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11th Aug 2016 6:28pm
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11th Aug 2016 8:29pm
A plaything? Nope! You're no one's follower far as I can tell, not one to be cast aside. The ideal is to rise together even if it usually doesn't work out that way. Anything less and, yes, one or the other is left somewhere in the dust. It wouldn't be you Crim. You're the one with the groupies if anything, all lined up to play the game. Love this!
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12th Aug 2016 10:15am