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~zen~
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soft lavender kissing your skin
as you walk the green forested paths
journeying onward, ever forward
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no looking back the demons behind you
there are life's markers
to assure you don't circle round
having to learn lessons time and again
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let the deep waters calm
you've swam in tempest oceans
without drowning, relax now
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meditate let your third eye ease open
waking to a new day
with wisdom you gathered like seaside shells
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the tides are gentle now
easing in and out
bringing insight and comfort
let them wash over you cleansing and calming
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~die to self and be born anew~
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 5th Aug 2016
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5th Aug 2016 2:21pm
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5th Aug 2016 7:56pm
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 2:24pm
Truly adore this piece. 💓
A calming dose of inspiration for the soul. As if being showered in the midst of a lavender aromatherapy bliss.
So very beautiful.
A calming dose of inspiration for the soul. As if being showered in the midst of a lavender aromatherapy bliss.
So very beautiful.
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5th Aug 2016 7:56pm
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5th Aug 2016 2:26pm
Last line . . . What else can I say, but in your face,
and back again . . .
"to assure you don't circle round
having to learn lessons time and again"
If only we could adhere to this truth also . . .
and back again . . .
"to assure you don't circle round
having to learn lessons time and again"
If only we could adhere to this truth also . . .
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5th Aug 2016 7:58pm
thank you Jerry smiling at your comment I've circled quite a few times in my life hopefully this time I pay closer attention to those markers :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~zen~
5th Aug 2016 2:37pm
one of if not your best to date... this is your "take that" bazooka to your self doubt Brenda!! oh how I loved this!!
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5th Aug 2016 7:59pm
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5th Aug 2016 8:00pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
5th Aug 2016 2:43pm
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5th Aug 2016 8:01pm
thank you lovely Amelia I'm trying to meditate to find some quiet in a noisy mind these place give me peace even when I can't be there in person..
love Crim
love Crim
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5th Aug 2016 2:47pm
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5th Aug 2016 8:02pm
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This is a lovely subconscious awakening, Brenda.
It's being gentle with yourself, tender with the past,
accepting the present. And, as a stroll in the woods
discovering all the beautiful things nature has to offer
in the returning to our organic selves and merging
with our surroundings. xo
It's being gentle with yourself, tender with the past,
accepting the present. And, as a stroll in the woods
discovering all the beautiful things nature has to offer
in the returning to our organic selves and merging
with our surroundings. xo
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5th Aug 2016 8:03pm
thank you dearest Sage one I love the beauty in your insight you always reveal something hidden from me with your comments.. I'm trying lovely lady..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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5th Aug 2016 3:42pm
Completely Zen after reading it a second time... The first time my mind went faster than your write..
The truth is that if you replace the verb "walk/walking" with the verb "wank/wanking", it changes a lot, lol (no offence, it was just unconscious and funny, that's why I comment it).
Great job as always :)
The truth is that if you replace the verb "walk/walking" with the verb "wank/wanking", it changes a lot, lol (no offence, it was just unconscious and funny, that's why I comment it).
Great job as always :)
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5th Aug 2016 8:04pm
lol yes Artemios it certainly does glad this took you to that Zen state the second time around :)
love Crim
love Crim
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5th Aug 2016 3:53pm
Wow! I absolutely love this poem! I took that stroll with you and I could actually feel my insides tickle as they relaxed into your beautiful surroundings. Thank you for taking me along.
Xx-sara
Xx-sara
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5th Aug 2016 8:05pm
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5th Aug 2016 3:59pm
Who's flying now? ;-)
"die to self and be born anew" > speechless!!!
Such a beautiful and honest poem, one to reread and cherish!
Love, Duende
"die to self and be born anew" > speechless!!!
Such a beautiful and honest poem, one to reread and cherish!
Love, Duende
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5th Aug 2016 8:06pm
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5th Aug 2016 8:43pm
"Zen" does wonders for my peace of mind, and I'll refer to it in times of trouble. This would be a good one to be read aloud for an AV if you're so inclined Crim. If not, I'll be content to peruse it with the sound of silence. Beautiful work from a wise and deeply calm lady.
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6th Aug 2016 1:46am
thank you graciously Sir Crow.. I get shaky reading just for family tripping over my words and the such needless to say my readings need some work.. some day will see :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ~zen~
5th Aug 2016 8:43pm
To see this side of your personne is
so sexy and beautiful,
my gosh ladyloves, many squeezes
and kisses.
I adore this mastering piece.
-Howlings
so sexy and beautiful,
my gosh ladyloves, many squeezes
and kisses.
I adore this mastering piece.
-Howlings
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6th Aug 2016 1:48am
thank you beautiful Howlings meditating this morning on these places actually worked for me I was quite surprised.. hugs and kisses you back :)
love Crim
love Crim
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5th Aug 2016 9:13pm
there are life's markers
to assure you don't circle round
True that, I made one big mark 😃😃😃
Truly a very beautiful piece crim.
to assure you don't circle round
True that, I made one big mark 😃😃😃
Truly a very beautiful piece crim.
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6th Aug 2016 1:50am
thank you Vick most kindly :)
I've lost my way on the path a few times just hoping I pay attention this time and don't circle back again..
love Crim
I've lost my way on the path a few times just hoping I pay attention this time and don't circle back again..
love Crim
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6th Aug 2016 1:50am
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 2:08am
Brenda.. so beautiful, and awe inspiring.. you truly are a poetic goddess.. and i love the new direction.. into the list it goes, love you!!
Dave
Dave
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6th Aug 2016 5:21pm
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6th Aug 2016 5:22pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Aug 2016 2:33am
6th Aug 2016 2:29am
My Beautiful Brenda....this brought me tears and touches the deepest depths of my soul...you have weathered storms that many shall not encounter and my turbulent waters have also been tread...
"no looking back the demons behind you
there are life's markers
to assure you don't circle round <~~ we shall always guide the other sound them
having to learn lessons time and again"
*
"the tides are gentle now
easing in and out
bringing insight and comfort
let them wash over you cleansing and calming <~~ each of us will always find the other floating to grab hands...
*
~die to self and be born anew~"
I BETTER have room for this otherwise something has GOT to go....
I cherish you lovely one and love you through eternity
I love you
Love Taryn xoxo
"no looking back the demons behind you
there are life's markers
to assure you don't circle round <~~ we shall always guide the other sound them
having to learn lessons time and again"
*
"the tides are gentle now
easing in and out
bringing insight and comfort
let them wash over you cleansing and calming <~~ each of us will always find the other floating to grab hands...
*
~die to self and be born anew~"
I BETTER have room for this otherwise something has GOT to go....
I cherish you lovely one and love you through eternity
I love you
Love Taryn xoxo
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6th Aug 2016 5:24pm
thank you my beautiful one you're a shining star to me that always guides me home through the fog..
I love you gorgeous one :)
love Brenda
I love you gorgeous one :)
love Brenda
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 2:30am
THANK GOODNESS! IT'S IN THERE!!
xoxoxoxoxoxox
Taryn
I love you
xoxoxoxoxoxox
Taryn
I love you
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6th Aug 2016 5:25pm
giggling I love you so much thank you beautiful for embracing me and this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 3:24am
Oh Precious Crim......this is an excellent heart and soul touching ink......beautifully created.......tipping my pen in respect and purple luv to you xo :)
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6th Aug 2016 5:25pm
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6th Aug 2016 4:26am
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6th Aug 2016 5:27pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades graciously for embracing this side of me light and dark in equal measures..
love Crim
love Crim
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6th Aug 2016 7:18pm
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6th Aug 2016 9:21pm
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7th Aug 2016 4:23am
Sometimes it feels good to be right - such a beautiful poem from the writer I know you to be :-)
this made me so happy, reading this :-)
this made me so happy, reading this :-)
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8th Aug 2016 2:47am
thank you David your comment made me happy knowing I made you smile :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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8th Aug 2016 2:48am
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2016 3:46am
~die to self and be born anew~ Your craft is remarkable . I have read this 6 times. Not to understand it. I fell in love with it.
Trisha
Trisha
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8th Aug 2016 4:38am
thank you most graciously Trisha for showing love for this write I'm moved greatly..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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8th Aug 2016 3:57pm
Lovely imaginative descriptive phrasing. Some of the concepts are not strictly Buddhic, but still filled with serenity and focus. Very very good.
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8th Aug 2016 6:05pm
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15th Aug 2016 1:07am
This piece is a meditation in itself. The lavender represents your awakening and spiritual growth from your experiences, the green forest paths, the healing journey. These paths are a favourite in my own meditations as is the water for cleansing your spirit, letting go of those demons. This is wonderful.
Love, Belladonna
Love, Belladonna
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15th Aug 2016 1:30am
thank you lovely Belladonna I must confess you enlightened me with your insight on this write.. sometimes I think I am simply a channel in which inspiration flows.. I'm new to meditation though when I think in these places even when my flesh is far away from natures beauty brings my soul peace.. looking forward to journeying the forested paths scattered with lavender with you :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2017 6:30am
I was looking to read on the dark side, when I came across your name. To my surprise, I read one of the most spiritual insights to life. I'm new but your incredible ink has me hooked.
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26th Oct 2017 1:11am
thank you beautiful poetess while I write dark a lot I surprise myself too with writes like this.. light & dark go hand in hand & reveal themselves as they will.. I look forward to reading you.. love Crim