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-nightmares and trees
I was a spider
I was the Sun
I was a pagan
I was a God
when I was all
I was none...
Published 30th Jul 2016
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30th Jul 2016 8:36am
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26th Mar 2017 10:08am
I like your use of spider to counter Sun. I saw the spider as something small and dark (as in evil but also color) that can easily be destroyed yet can be just as deadly as the sun. What were you thinking?
26th Mar 2017 10:52am
It's about spirituality and how we are all the same. Nothing better, or worse...
26th Mar 2017 10:58am
I see, interesting. I guess I read way more into simple words than I needed too. It must be all those college professors drilling my mind.
27th Mar 2017 12:33pm
