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-purgatory under the sheets
you play with words and the universe
as if you've passed this test before
opening doors for those who would see
granting light where it was once dark...
in me, in the closet, where the unknown
has always roamed the night, when young
eyes try not to listen for a whisper or creak
while frozen in fear for what seems like an
eternal visit to purgatory under the sheets...
Published 21st Jul 2016
| Edited 22nd Jul 2016
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oh, I'm sure dada Dan coulda
taken the test before, although
I'm damn sure the examiners
would have failed to get it...
there'd be with everyone else,
under the covers
of darkness... :)
taken the test before, although
I'm damn sure the examiners
would have failed to get it...
there'd be with everyone else,
under the covers
of darkness... :)
haha, I'll never get tired of your witty comments, Paul. Though, this poem was inspired by a comment I made to Dano-the-mano, it's about someone else at the same time. I thank him for his inspiration regardless...
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 00:33am
Hey Fenom......I really like this.....I thought it to be an awesome tribute to a soul of light that led you out of the darkness......enjoyed this.......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
22nd Jul 2016 00:37am
22nd Jul 2016 3:10am
You have such a different writing style. I read this one more than once and enjoyed each time. Well said.
22nd Jul 2016 6:05am
22nd Jul 2016 10:47am
you're tripping over a homophone in s2 L3
i'm assuming "creak" is what you're going for, yes?
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a consuming darkness in your musings here,
quite a compelling read
i'm assuming "creak" is what you're going for, yes?
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a consuming darkness in your musings here,
quite a compelling read
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