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Unsung Monologue
I’ll be dreaming of you tonight.
Transmit my being to consume every orbit around you.
I want to walk by you just to moonlight requisition your scent again.
Quietly ambush it inside my breath and never let go until
the spill of you causes my inhale to coalesce within ‘your chest.
Unknowingly is my feelings whenever you gaze at my maturity.
And if the matureness of tantalized berry is what you taste when
my anonymity drench you,
My aqua vita is meant to be extracted and cajoled
into an origin of wine intending to age within the cellar
of your numinous ways.
I reconstructed eternity with you.
When azure velvet concealed your most intimate places
and a pictographic stance captured your view.
Our vibrant palettes fused and adorned tribal elliptical galaxy
chastened only by the diverging force of luminous symbols.
Faraway…chimes
Drums.
You’re strumming of curves on shimmering skin
before access into the longevity of my smile.
I witnessed your genes laminate my global desire…
while promising to display a legacy of majestic fortitude.
You are…
the flawless unsung monologue I refuse to characterize
with the vagrant sea of words.
You are the one that clutch my hands before my body bends
into a symmetrical structure,
then collapse breathlessly from 3rd and 4th electrifying tries
while euphoria reach the almanac in me, again and again.
You’ve branded your name on my quivering walls
with the signature of your foreskin.
You’ve baptize me with gratifying love that can harvest joviality
rooted only by your creed to cultivate me more.
If….
I’m to be the divine decree of paradisiacal dots your love will connect,
plant and grow… then by all means…
Plot me.
Rain~
Published 21st Jul 2016
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21st Jul 2016 6:45pm
22nd Jul 2016 9:33pm
Willow, you said plenty! :) Thank you so much for embracing my imagery... xo
21st Jul 2016 6:53pm
your numinous ways.
I absolutely love the word 'numinous'.
flawless unsung monologue I refuse to characterize
with the vagrant sea of words.
Sometimes there are simply no words that are
adequate enough to convey meaning, much
less too many of them that distract from the
essence's origin.
The ending is brilliant, Rain.
Connect the dots of me to you.
Wonderful you are in both posts and responses.
We are blessed to have your presence.
I absolutely love the word 'numinous'.
flawless unsung monologue I refuse to characterize
with the vagrant sea of words.
Sometimes there are simply no words that are
adequate enough to convey meaning, much
less too many of them that distract from the
essence's origin.
The ending is brilliant, Rain.
Connect the dots of me to you.
Wonderful you are in both posts and responses.
We are blessed to have your presence.
...which is why actions will always reign supreme over words. It's when you balance the two that creates something extraordinary. :)
It's always a delightful experience when you leave encouraging words, saturated with wisdom. You are much too kind, thank you Ahavati!
edit: *Your last two lines really touched me! Humbled!* xo
It's always a delightful experience when you leave encouraging words, saturated with wisdom. You are much too kind, thank you Ahavati!
edit: *Your last two lines really touched me! Humbled!* xo
21st Jul 2016 7:04pm
22nd Jul 2016 9:42pm
21st Jul 2016 7:09pm
Transcendent. ..
Imaginative. ..
Inspirational. ..
Shifting the terrain of thought
Into the realm of metaphysics
Where poetic mosaics
Await the canvass that is
The soul...
Imaginative. ..
Inspirational. ..
Shifting the terrain of thought
Into the realm of metaphysics
Where poetic mosaics
Await the canvass that is
The soul...
22nd Jul 2016 9:46pm
Wow! Mighty fine commentary, Naajir! Been taken lessons from you ;)
Thanks hun and appreciate you babysitting her...
Thanks hun and appreciate you babysitting her...
21st Jul 2016 7:42pm
22nd Jul 2016 9:50pm
...as are you, je! Appreciate the sonnet shine of your smile . :) Thank you!
21st Jul 2016 8:02pm
Really impressive blend of spirituality and eroticism, enough to get a crowfly euphoric. Plotting you would be a revelation and a pleasure. This one soars, Rain! If you've got the garden, I've got the time.
22nd Jul 2016 10:06pm
*brush my shoulders off* ;) Thrilled this lends enough satisfaction to get you to plot me. HA! Your comment was a joy to read. Thank you Crow, and I'm elated you're cyber-shelving her. ;)
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21st Jul 2016 9:57pm
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22nd Jul 2016 10:18pm
Sister,
My God.. Ahhh... Did you have to do it to them like that though lol... You're nothing but the absolute truth.. You are a Goddess, A Visionary, You embody and embrace your gift so graciously it gives me chills💋..
Consider me plotted, I totally love it!
My God.. Ahhh... Did you have to do it to them like that though lol... You're nothing but the absolute truth.. You are a Goddess, A Visionary, You embody and embrace your gift so graciously it gives me chills💋..
Consider me plotted, I totally love it!
22nd Jul 2016 10:26pm
Lil sis, your presence on my page always puffs my cheeks out from the widen smile you plaster on my face with your lyrical praise and exalting influence. Your poetic love is real, and is deeply felt beyond this site. Thank you so much and appreciate you listing her. xo
21st Jul 2016 10:50pm
This ink was truly Transcendent!!
I'm wowed n agasp without coherence... Yea, one of your top ten best ever!!! :)
I'm wowed n agasp without coherence... Yea, one of your top ten best ever!!! :)
Oh my! Now that's an awesome statement, Rich!
Blushing at the notion. Thank you for the unwavering support. :)
Blushing at the notion. Thank you for the unwavering support. :)
22nd Jul 2016 2:08am
thought it was lost in the stars
but there it was, right by the bed.
a remarkable creed...
but there it was, right by the bed.
a remarkable creed...
22nd Jul 2016 10:42pm
I feel like I'm lost amongst the stars when reading your comments and your poetry.
A moonlit majestic dream... never to wake from. :) Thanks John, always adore your visits...
A moonlit majestic dream... never to wake from. :) Thanks John, always adore your visits...
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22nd Jul 2016 11:55am
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22nd Jul 2016 10:37pm
Melia, your comment is just as poetic as your beautiful ink.
You really have a gift in beautifying and simplifying your thoughts. :) Thank you so much....
You really have a gift in beautifying and simplifying your thoughts. :) Thank you so much....
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 3:38pm
Oh Rain, this reads like something engraved on the skin with blood and ink, love profess till eternity, its almost like 2 bodies live and breathe as one. I don't know how you make everything so beautiful but you do..i'm in awe.
22nd Jul 2016 11:01pm
Gosh Vee, that was so dang gorgeous to me! :)
"I don't know how you make everything so beautiful but you do..i'm in awe." <--- umm...that's exactly where my cognitive processing is, every single time I read anything of yours, truly! :) Thank you so much! xo
"I don't know how you make everything so beautiful but you do..i'm in awe." <--- umm...that's exactly where my cognitive processing is, every single time I read anything of yours, truly! :) Thank you so much! xo
23rd Jul 2016 3:35pm
what a celestial sultry sweet! too many lines to pick but "I reconstructed eternity with you." just dizzam goddess...
23rd Jul 2016 7:50pm
I actually thought long and hard about that line and it's one of my fav. The endless possibilities of reconstructing eternity is unfathomable. Happy you liked Dean, thanks for the listing sug.
31st Jul 2016 9:04am
The most sexually beautiful thing I've ever read. I liked it but I LOVE it. And you for posting it. Thank you.
1st Aug 2016 00:07am
OmG! That was so humbling! And I must confess, you caressed my ego a wee bit. ;)
Thank you Flow, and welcome to the dup jungle....
Thank you Flow, and welcome to the dup jungle....
Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 2:09am
Rain.. such a luscious vibe.. you always deliver.. much respect, and love..
Dave
Dave
1st Aug 2016 2:45am
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2nd Aug 2019 10:43pm
I'm still blown away by the way your quill moves. Had to come back to this one, soak in it, and take it home. Stills the breath, it does... ~Willow
3rd Aug 2019 7:12am
