Sundown

Beautiful imagery, Jemac.
The song of sunset
on a sandy beach.

The blue of your dress
Clouding your feet.

Thank You Ahavati for the read and Beautiful comments ... Much appreciated ..

Absorbing the moment, living the moment..sometimes we need that..beautifully penned Jeje.

Thank you Very for the read and lovely comments ... definitely need these moments ... Good for the soul ...

so well written I found myself in that moment - beautiful :-)

Thank You David for the read and Beautiful comments ... Much appreciated ...

that's an elegant escape,
a moment alone but not lonely
in your poem...

Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments ... Always appreciated ...

This has warmth and serenity. I sense retrospection, though it's not stated. I like that, and this is a lovely piece of writing.

There are some suggestions I have for your consideration: omitting "of" from "of midnight blue" and "so" from "wine so slowly". Neither word seems necessary to me, but the poem doesn't suffer from them. I also don't think the comma in the last stanza is needed.

Thank you so much paperstains for the read thoughtful comments and helpful critique.. much appreciated ... changes made

I'm glad you found them useful. :-)