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Tonight Shall Be Forever...
watching the drip
slip from laminated lips
immerse my lance
her skin in a luster
holding a cluster
coerced by my hands
flash forward in her mansion
legs branching
relishing the feeling
of her fluorescent fuchsia swatch
watching her watch
us on the ceiling
she strive to move faster
I thrive to be master
slowing down the tempo
nails like acid on my pelt
gel cascade and melt,
we disintegrate and reassemble
lost below lavender Celsius
overheard in detail I see us
till the portrait pixelate
spindles of time we sever
tonight shall be forever
the only way to justify the wait...
slip from laminated lips
immerse my lance
her skin in a luster
holding a cluster
coerced by my hands
flash forward in her mansion
legs branching
relishing the feeling
of her fluorescent fuchsia swatch
watching her watch
us on the ceiling
she strive to move faster
I thrive to be master
slowing down the tempo
nails like acid on my pelt
gel cascade and melt,
we disintegrate and reassemble
lost below lavender Celsius
overheard in detail I see us
till the portrait pixelate
spindles of time we sever
tonight shall be forever
the only way to justify the wait...
Published 11th Jul 2016
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11th Jul 2016 3:41pm
"she strive to move faster
I thrive to be master
slowing down the tempo"
arousing erotic Dean..
love Crim
I thrive to be master
slowing down the tempo"
arousing erotic Dean..
love Crim
Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 4:52pm
It's early here and i can feel the heat rising, the tempo amp'ing, the pulse pulsating...I wanna blame the coffee but I know its your poem Dean.
This is so sweetly erotic and hot..so glad to see you back, you sure have been missed :)
This is so sweetly erotic and hot..so glad to see you back, you sure have been missed :)
11th Jul 2016 7:03pm
"lost below lavender Celsius
overheard in detail I see us
till the portrait pixelate"
That is so perfectly described, Dean.
How we envision things so clearly
before they pixelate with time.
"spindles of time we sever
tonight shall be forever
the only way to justify the wait..."
the final line anchors the entire
poem and clears the pixelation
into reality.
overheard in detail I see us
till the portrait pixelate"
That is so perfectly described, Dean.
How we envision things so clearly
before they pixelate with time.
"spindles of time we sever
tonight shall be forever
the only way to justify the wait..."
the final line anchors the entire
poem and clears the pixelation
into reality.
11th Jul 2016 10:11pm
He's backkkk!! And sexy as ever...
This was a sensual delight in every aspect of erotic poetry.
Betty Wright's "Tonight Is The night" is stuck in my head after reading this gem......
This was a sensual delight in every aspect of erotic poetry.
Betty Wright's "Tonight Is The night" is stuck in my head after reading this gem......
12th Jul 2016 8:56am
well, it's winter here
& i just took off my coat ...
... superb writing, dean
it's so good to read you again
& i just took off my coat ...
... superb writing, dean
it's so good to read you again
Anonymous
26th Jul 2016 8:51am
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28th Jul 2016 12:47pm
I can tell you're a man that makes the world go round. You definitely made the temperature hot in my office lol.
29th Jul 2016 1:00am
Dean, your so masterful
as your ink.. .I can tell.
Because you treat your
parchment beautifully and
the imagos thereon are
so inspiring.
Love this deeply.
-Howlings
as your ink.. .I can tell.
Because you treat your
parchment beautifully and
the imagos thereon are
so inspiring.
Love this deeply.
-Howlings
Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 3:40am
Very very nice Dean.......luvin this sensual ink......brilliant lines thru out......enjoyed this much.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
29th Aug 2016 4:13pm
Sexy ink!!!
Beautiful choice of words... love the alliteration and sound throughout the whole poem!
Beautiful choice of words... love the alliteration and sound throughout the whole poem!
