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Xylophile
Let me inhale dirty wood
raw with bloody after-
birth of unbathed soil.
Let me feel a compass
of conduits beneath bare
feet, those gnarled arteries
whose arthritic limbs
stretch deep into
petrified bone and egg.
I yearn to hear the creaking
back of pines keeping
peace with the wind,
shooting their prickly
coat of quills over
the dampened floor
beneath my steps.
To taste feral blood
from the Hawk's beak;
from the shadow…
the strike…the screech:
Life transcending this planet.
I briefly wince for the ethereal
delicacy being peeled
from its skeletal remains
before honing my own
survival skills.
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Re. Xylophile
13th Jun 2016 11:06pm
Re. Xylophile
13th Jun 2016 11:21pm
and a snap of a twig
in the wood
was always music
to my ears
if a little nerve
wracking...
in the wood
was always music
to my ears
if a little nerve
wracking...
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Re. Xylophile
13th Jun 2016 11:46pm
Ahavati,there's always deep sense of connectivity with your vibes that resonate within. .
I love how things come to life through your writes..
Exquisitely dark this is..
I love how things come to life through your writes..
Exquisitely dark this is..
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Re. Xylophile
13th Jun 2016 11:52pm
If ever a poem were made to explain the dearth of loneliness, this is it. Lost in the empty cavity of the wilderness.
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Re. Xylophile
Visceral is a word too small to encompass the way your composition strikes me. Agree with Naajir. There is a webwork of intricacy to your writes, depths upon depths. I am blown away, line by line.
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Re. Xylophile
14th Jun 2016 5:16am
your poem is endowed w/unrestricted liberty,
let's us soar on the hawk's wings...
let's us soar on the hawk's wings...
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Re. Xylophile
14th Jun 2016 5:48am
I loves the trees too! Said it before and I'll say it again... we should never have left them. A powerful prayer for the trees with an ominous last verse...
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Re. Xylophile
Anonymous
15th Jun 2016 3:19pm
this poem just slices into me. it is so sad and full of resignation that i wish wasn't happening.
that last stanza...goodness it hurts.
that last stanza...goodness it hurts.
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Re. Xylophile
15th Jun 2016 6:53pm
This is just beautiful. I really wish I had a more in depth comment to leave, but it just isn't coming to me at the moment. That being said, it struck me as a piece which I should acknowledge. Nice write.
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Re. Xylophile
19th Jun 2016 5:38pm
Re. Xylophile
21st Jun 2016 10:14am
as with everything you write,
this pulses with something
exquisitely primordial
loved
xo
this pulses with something
exquisitely primordial
loved
xo
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21st Jun 2016 11:53am
Re. Xylophile
22nd Jun 2016 9:20pm
love the way you connect to the world that was here before us, that is with us, and makes known that it is also a part of us
thank you for expressing things that I know but struggle to find strong enough words to explain my feelings to others
thank you for expressing things that I know but struggle to find strong enough words to explain my feelings to others
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23rd Jun 2016 1:10am
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25th Nov 2016 6:36pm
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