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You Can Say I Called It
hand on America's pulse
fear runs wild
in the land of the diseased
Trump will be president
fifty dead, fifty three injured in Orlando
gunned down for living free
his radically insane ideas
on immigration
will usher in
THE NEW WORLD ORDER
the poor will continue to be beaten on
as the rich step on our dead aborted babies
all the way to the top
Illuminati in control
giving guns to exterminate the rest of the world
now they're turned on us
a country built on the backs of slaves
stolen from the peaceful living natives here
the streets of the brave running with blood
our children build castles
out of used hypodermic needles
the homeless live uncovered while warehouses sit empty
yeah we're fucking free
running to our own destruction
Trump for president
hell with it let's kiss our asses goodbye
as the next world war goes down
suicidal I'm voting for him
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Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 5:41pm
I hate politics. Especially now. Whenever elections rolls around it's like choosing which pile of dogshit to step in. Nice read, though, the apocalypse seems to be closer than most people think.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 5:49pm
Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 5:56pm
'a country built on the backs of slaves
stolen from the peaceful living natives here'
Yep; you called it.
If Trump is elected we can pretty much assume
he will be the last president of the United States.
stolen from the peaceful living natives here'
Yep; you called it.
If Trump is elected we can pretty much assume
he will be the last president of the United States.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 6:09pm
Re. You Can Say I called It
"
a country built on the backs of slaves
stolen from the peaceful living natives here"
Not quite true, Crim. Many of the slaves were sold to the white man by their
Chiefs and then brought here. Matters not, it was, and still is, a diabolical act.
Say what you will about about how Trump speaks his mind, he at least is talking
about turning America back to something we used to be. This country has
had far too much of liberal governing. We will see what will happen after the
election is held, if they don't kill him before it gets that far.
a country built on the backs of slaves
stolen from the peaceful living natives here"
Not quite true, Crim. Many of the slaves were sold to the white man by their
Chiefs and then brought here. Matters not, it was, and still is, a diabolical act.
Say what you will about about how Trump speaks his mind, he at least is talking
about turning America back to something we used to be. This country has
had far too much of liberal governing. We will see what will happen after the
election is held, if they don't kill him before it gets that far.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 6:10pm
Jerry just playing advocate to the devil with this one a bit..
you're a wise man..
love Brenda
you're a wise man..
love Brenda
Re. You Can Say I called It
Anonymous
13th Jun 2016 6:15pm
I hear ya my lady loves
..let's get the shit over with, huh?
Powerfully composed
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..let's get the shit over with, huh?
Powerfully composed
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Re: Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 6:27pm
Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 6:27pm
Suicide indeed. Why not. And anyway, the world has gone mad.
Just an excellent poem.
Just an excellent poem.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I called It
13th Jun 2016 6:30pm
Re. You Can Say I Called It
13th Jun 2016 6:53pm
Right on Crim! I think I can hear Gideon's trumpet blowing right now. I can't wait to hear the debate between Hillary and Trump. I think she'll rake him over the coals. This is VERY powerfully worded, and I only wish Trump could read this missive from a Deep Underground queen. He'd spontaneously combust. Loved this!
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
13th Jun 2016 7:02pm
thank you graciously Sir Crow I can't wait to see the debate as well..
just trying to stir the waters of thought here a bit..
love Crim
just trying to stir the waters of thought here a bit..
love Crim
Re. You Can Say I Called It
13th Jun 2016 10:14pm
You have powerfully voiced your
thoughts on these topics Brenda.
I don't think that I ever have, but,
must say that I enjoyed it.
People hate politics and rightfully so... they're a sham anyways and
convoluted, but, we should all
formulate an opinion and speak
that mother-fucker out loud until
they rip our tongues out.
An welcomed rant here... Dantalyon
thoughts on these topics Brenda.
I don't think that I ever have, but,
must say that I enjoyed it.
People hate politics and rightfully so... they're a sham anyways and
convoluted, but, we should all
formulate an opinion and speak
that mother-fucker out loud until
they rip our tongues out.
An welcomed rant here... Dantalyon
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:36am
thank you dearest Dantalyon not usually my thing either.. worrying about the state of things I'm not really sure where this came from just thoughts floating in my head..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. You Can Say I Called It
thing about this. well one of the things anyway which some American people forget, is Trump has the support of a fair amount of American people. he's the last one standing
because he has calculated correctly there are more loud mouth racist buggitod fucks with a vote than there were who believed in the other contenders of that selection process
forget about trump as a problem. it's the huge amount of people who believe in his policy is the problem. where/ who are they going to go to when Trump goes ?
but worse than that. much worse than that is the she-wolf who'll actually get elected
..decent poem Crime, fair play
because he has calculated correctly there are more loud mouth racist buggitod fucks with a vote than there were who believed in the other contenders of that selection process
forget about trump as a problem. it's the huge amount of people who believe in his policy is the problem. where/ who are they going to go to when Trump goes ?
but worse than that. much worse than that is the she-wolf who'll actually get elected
..decent poem Crime, fair play
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:37am
thank you Craic I'm not for Hillary either I'm just starting to get nervous Trump is going to win he's a wild cannon in a way I hope I'm seeing him wrong..
love Crim
love Crim
Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 8:06pm
Hitlary for prison Crim
Check out infowars.com crim and listen to what Alex jones has to say and then make up your own mind. Alot of what he says makes sense in that weird non filtered way. You just have to sift through it
Tough situation though with a choice of devils arsehole or the devils genital wart, you decide who is who there.
Good discussion piece Brenda.
Check out infowars.com crim and listen to what Alex jones has to say and then make up your own mind. Alot of what he says makes sense in that weird non filtered way. You just have to sift through it
Tough situation though with a choice of devils arsehole or the devils genital wart, you decide who is who there.
Good discussion piece Brenda.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 11:37pm
thank you Michael i'll have to check out Alex Jones..
it's a tough call I'd rather Trump over Hillary his seeming impulsive nature has me a bit nervous though..
love Brenda
it's a tough call I'd rather Trump over Hillary his seeming impulsive nature has me a bit nervous though..
love Brenda
Re. You Can Say I Called It
14th Jun 2016 3:42am
Wow Crim......I'm actually breathless reading such a strong voice in this write.....heart breaking all the way thru......yiu e raised good points that's for sure......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:38am
Re. You Can Say I Called It
14th Jun 2016 5:24am
that's a powerful tirade against our misguided society.
tongue of fire, Crim...
tongue of fire, Crim...
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:39am
Re. You Can Say I Called It
14th Jun 2016 9:09am
I been so over politics for awhile now. It just seems like one big joke. Only problem is that good people suffer because of people like Trump. It also gives ignorant people an excuse to be ignorant.
I guess at the end of the day this is just the way the world is. If its not Trump it will be some other dumb ass that fucks up the world.
Great write ^^
I guess at the end of the day this is just the way the world is. If its not Trump it will be some other dumb ass that fucks up the world.
Great write ^^
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:40am
thank you DC you're right just things seem to be getting real crazy it's scaring me..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. You Can Say I Called It
14th Jun 2016 4:59pm
Early on I thought his campaign was a joke ... A publicity stunt, and laughed it off with friends in bar.
Now, it's frightening to think he just might win. And you're right, that tragedy in Florida will bolster his stances with American extremists and even the casual voter.
Now, it's frightening to think he just might win. And you're right, that tragedy in Florida will bolster his stances with American extremists and even the casual voter.
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
15th Jun 2016 00:41am
thank you Lobo yes it is frightening the man is unpredictable and that makes me nervous..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. You Can Say I Called It
Anonymous
18th Jun 2016 1:37am
Brenda.. fucking brilliant political piece.. truth..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
20th Jun 2016 1:51am
Re. You Can Say I Called It
16th Jul 2016 11:36am
Bold and blunt - annihalates the bull's eye! an observational home run indeed.... brave ink Brenda! it's unfortunately the sh** sandwich the people are in..God help us... I see a living person in this ink!
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Re: Re. You Can Say I Called It
16th Jul 2016 10:30pm
thank you graciously for feeling me on this write and seeing a piece of my heart..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. You Can Say I Called It
9th Nov 2016 1:18pm