The Lie That Runs My Life

grand job, Al

soooo, is it a double bluff ?  you DO wanna fuck my wife's sister's friend !?  [ insert sound of confusion]  

solid decent write ...just like your character

Oooh Eamon

You rockstar! Look the truth is I ain't met her yet, but if she is likely to lock herself up in candle lit darkness for a week, she's likely to be much moooore fun than your wife!
[Insert sounds of excitement]

the character comment me mate is definitely a reciprocated thought.

Love ja dude!

Al

Deep self reflection here. I think you're looking behind those curtains. This is one of the most honest, unpretentious things I've seen on this site...and maybe any where else.

Yeah that self search magic, is something we don't quite do enough, isit?

Peepin at you from behind em curtains mate, I see you!

Thank you for the kind kind words regarding my loading my heart out on the page, think this piece is part of a life transition that must take place rather soon.

Good to have you reading [and commenting] on my pages.

Regards
Al

great write Al I feel you on preferring to be in the quiet as to all the noise that is life..

love Brenda

That's it Brenda, you are so so right, it's the silence that is missing and leaving a huge shallow void in the middle of no where.

Kind Regards

Al -x-x-x-
Love ja Crims

Love the sacred minimalism on display here. Pruned well. Potent thoughts. I like the way candles have been handled as much more than a prop here, almost becoming the central character. Write on Al. :)

I am so grateful that the candle thing comes across as a central part, does the meditation appear with out the words? That was after all the spiritual tie in?

Thanks for reading me, and letting me read your gold mate!

Kind regards
Al

As someone who likes to be alone alot,
I feel this so much

Glad that I gave your solitude some food my friend

Thanx for thee note

-x-

nice, tidy, well-crafted little 'confessional', there Al.......peace[s]UP

Oi Dan

R E S P E C T  Man!

Al

As a fellow solitaire I will hail thee on the road. Or, in the hall.
I do enjoy people over, but am very strict about who I allow in my home
to maintain the energy at a positive level as possible. And I do enjoy a
good adventure, exploration, and thrill of discovery. It's in my blood;
however, society is NOT.

Or, am I lying to myself? :)

Well done, Al.

;)

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<3

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Hey Al this stopped me in my tracks and I saw myself in the light you lit - fine write indeed

Self reflection mate

Self reflection

then pen it!

(I am a loner
hermit
My happiest moment
is spent
staring at a candle
flame
with the music
background
chiming

I don't want to
fuck your wife
sister
or friend

I don't really need
to impress
20 people
at a party

or have a following
at Sunday
lunch

but I do need
to hide my head
behind
draped curtains
and
incense

keeping my business
my own )

Yep, this about sums it up darling
of mine, so much to relate to,
and do forgive the sudden urge
that crept upon me..to quote your
being.

Always,
Howlings

but I do need
to hide my head
behind
draped curtains
and
incense > these lines took my breath away!

This piece is a great example of less is more...
Strong write... one I can relate to!

Oh Hello

You new around these pages. Lovely to meet you, thank you for popping in and visiting here and please do come again!

Thank you so much for commenting to.

Blue Skies at you

Al -x-

You're welcome!

Yes, this is our first encounter, Crimsin brought me here...

Lovely to meet you too, I surely visit your page again!

Purple skies and smiles at you~

well said my friend, strong and confident
lol

Ahh Dora

Let's run away!

;)

lets