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Elasticity
Laughter heals a lot of hurts.
~ Madeleine L’Engle
I watch my grandson
expand and retract on
the oval rubber band he
pedals his bike around.
Near enough to reach out
and catch the laughter he
tosses, and, in just a matter
of seconds, far enough to
transform into a tiny winged
hawk gliding over fathoms
of stretched octopus limbs,
seaweed dangling from their skin
in underlying currents dappled
with sunlit wind and shade.
There’s peace in a child’s
laugh that adults rediscover,
a long forgotten secret by
observing such a trusting
spirit who wants nothing
more than this second.
This is my heart’s wish
in writing poetry: a pure
desire to pen nothing
except Life in moments
of labored birth that will
expand into the world
as freedom, and retract
as laughter that hurting
spirits find easy to catch.
~
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27th May 2016 6:53pm
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How perfectly beautiful. You have captured the eternal fragility. I'll trust your sure hands with a butterfly net on a windy day. haha ;) Namaste.
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27th May 2016 6:55pm
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27th May 2016 8:28pm
...your descriptive writing skills are superb. You make the image so real. *Smiling*
The body heals with play,
the mind heals with laughter,
and the spirit heals with joy. Proverbs~
The body heals with play,
the mind heals with laughter,
and the spirit heals with joy. Proverbs~
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27th May 2016 8:47pm
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27th May 2016 10:35pm
you say that you wish to write of life
in moments and I think your wish has been granted...
and you're also one
of the best image takers
- & makers - I've read.
in moments and I think your wish has been granted...
and you're also one
of the best image takers
- & makers - I've read.
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28th May 2016 2:09pm
Though he's always been inspiring, it appears that my grandprecious had become my little muse, Paul.
Thank you for such a humbling comment, my friend.
Thank you for such a humbling comment, my friend.
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27th May 2016 11:28pm
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28th May 2016 2:10pm
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28th May 2016 4:56am
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Yep. He's been asking for one of those too! Thank you, John. Laughter is highly contagious.
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Expanding and retracting... the beating heart of poetry. It is alive and well :)
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28th May 2016 2:14pm
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28th May 2016 9:51am
Simply God gorgeous work! Bravo! Bravo!
The opening stanza is so thoroughly engaging it renders one breathless yet joyed.
The opening stanza is so thoroughly engaging it renders one breathless yet joyed.
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28th May 2016 2:17pm
"God gorgeous work"
You've said that one other time to me and I was humbled to silence. I'm trying to conjur adequate words of appreciation for such a gracious response; however, I don't believe I'm going to find any that convey my appreciation. Honored, San Pedro. Humbly and simply. Thank you.
You've said that one other time to me and I was humbled to silence. I'm trying to conjur adequate words of appreciation for such a gracious response; however, I don't believe I'm going to find any that convey my appreciation. Honored, San Pedro. Humbly and simply. Thank you.
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28th May 2016 6:22pm
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31st May 2016 7:20pm
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Re. Elasticity
1st Jun 2016 5:05am
Yes sister bravo - I can not think of a better reason to write - you filled my room with joy
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1st Jun 2016 7:25pm
Filling someone's space with joy is the highest compliment one can receive, me thinks.
Thank you, Whale.
Thank you, Whale.