Blood jet is poetry: after Plath

powerful poetry wise one..

love Crim

Thank you, Crim.

killer, kid......very cool homage(if that's what it is- dont mean to be all presumptuous'n shit, yknow?)

Thank you, Dan.
You're never presumptuous.

yes. true. I always presume to be not presumptuous , but....o, nevermind

This has the feel of how on the surface things look pristine and perfect and inside a convoluted twisted reality, just like her, just like her poetry.
The imagery is quite descriptive, very nice Ahavati, enjoyed it.

I like how your avatar is wearing a wide brimmed hat such as the one described in the poem. :)

(haha @ Daniel)

Thank you, Vee. I appreciate your insight and response.
It's pretty much spot on.

A powerful write Ahavati. Many points are noteworthy, the images they evoke in the mind's eye are so clear and revelatory.  
 
The first verse is so arid. I think I reached for my coffee unconsciously, the effective rendering causing a psychosomatic thirst to arise.  
 
Second verse reminds me of my recent post where I was making a (well tread, at this point) metaphor about the absurdity and madness of human beings and our society by mentioning Lewis Carroll's Mad Hatter, the March Hare and their tea party. Absurdity, futility. You adroitly touch upon ideas, awaken the mind and heart to them and dance away. Not belaboring a point is something a master class author executes gracefully.  
 
Third verse brings the two together in a solid, seamless summation. (Oh, but I love the subtle subconscious syllabic rhyming of alliteration). Plath is amazing and worthy of remembrance. Minding one's manners out of respect is done for both the other and the self, I came to realize. One should purport themselves with dignity, calm and humility, not as a surface show to appear aloof or superior, but as a display of one's awareness and wellness of spirit. I did a good bit of ranting in my works when I was younger, but as I calmed, I found my works calming in turn, an author's works being an author's shadow.

Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate the time you've taken to respond
and love your interpretation. Plath is both amazing and worthy of
remembrance. I think it so important to look down on the road we're
walking and remember that some paved it with their own lives.
I think that very revelation would cause us to walk it a bit more
lightly and with respect for the dangerous beauty that is poetry.

Again, thank you.

Namaste. :)

Beautiful weight with words ...

"Chatter of saucers...drought of belief"

One of the first etiquette lessons I was taught was how
to balance a tea cup that it not rattle the saucer when
socializing. I was hoping the words would be weighty
enough to prevent it's movement.

Thank you, Brother.

I feel like I have read this before, a brilliant piece to say the least!

If you're referring to Plath I'm humbled. Thank you.

In the lone of my opinion this piece reminds me of a girl flourishing into a woman, and carrying with it all the obstacles and burdens that which creates her. . .Quite an echo stroll, Lady Ahavati; Plath is, and always has been, brilliant. . .~xo, Devlin.

Thank you, Devlin. I appreciate that very much.

Thank you, View.

Thank you, Aemelia. I very much appreciate your observations. They encourage me to step outside of my comfort zone.

that's intense, like a monolith springing up where it's not expected.
shows why woman never needed a penis...

Thank you so much, John. Always appreciate your feedback.

tiny gods, miss vati, this is such a complex work of art

Thank you, Katja. I so appreciate your comments.

Ahavati, I just love the beauty that lies within your pen. Something so authentic and pure about your scribes that makes the reader want to take a long sigh. Love it!

Thank you very much, Rain. This is such a lovely thing to wake up to.
And so appreciated. xo

A well painted poem, the little details perfectly fitted the character and content of the writing.

Thank you so much adored one.
I truly appreciate your time and words.

My dearest honey, you should see
the smile on my face ..as of now..
this has rock'd my world and you
know it..

In love with this, as in one of many.
holyfathergods..


-Howlings

Thank you so much, Howling's.
You're words mean a lot.