Sadist's dolly

*I'm that guy, the guy who gives up
Fold his cards, walks away, moves on.
I have often found that the people I fold on
come running back holding an Ace, the moment the
hand hits the table.

I love how you showed those emotions in this,  
it makes it authentically human, and well that's awesome.

Must admit, it's first time I've thought of a relationship
as a card game, but you know you are so right.

That's exactly what it is.  
Loved this, thanks for the read.

mwah -x-

Al

thank you most kindly Al I hear you on folding and walking away..  
 
though it's not always easy..  
 
often times there are plenty of bluffs and calling each other on bullshit before someone finally folds and is down the road for good..  
 
thank you again friend for your kind and thoughtful comments..  
 
love Brenda

Wow dear Crimson, feel this I do... and understand not... why more than should find themselves with an insufficient hand. Held those cards too long myself in more than one game. You always I'm in awe the picture your words paint.

<3 dkruie

thank you most graciously Dkruie for the kind thoughts..

love Crim

Fucke me lady loves!!
..you are breadth, oh my
damn spinal gosh .

as it did fold within and under
the intensity of this..

I'm so done, I so love.

-

thank you Malady you put such a smile on my face with your enthusiastic comment :)

love Crim

I still think you've got something up your sleeve Crim, so hold that fold.  Sadists don't often play with a full deck anyway.

"toying with this dolly of yours      
roughed up and missing one eye      
that you shelve when the mood strikes"

I'd like to see this dolly turn the table and get the upper hand.  What goes around....  Loved this!

thank you Sir Crow for the vote of confidence and the lovely comment..

love Crim

...you need to play cards with a better class of people....

good advise Satan..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, fold you shall not! At least not while I'm here! A vulnerable write disclosed for us all and you leave me speechless lovely one...

"broken shards of what we used to be        
haunts with mewlings that aren't uttered        
smothered by your possession        
       
smoke floats across your face        
settling above your head like a halo        
though no angel, you're Sadistic in your desires"
~ haunting perfection!

I love you!

xoxo Taryn

oh my love I will not be folding when it comes to life never maybe in a relationship though..

thank you beautiful one for showing me and this write so much love :)

I love you..

xoxo Brenda

Not that I'd want you fold, (unless it has to give me more 'ass'cess lol but I believe sometimes u gotta know when to fold... Powerful, sad spill.

Poe you made gave me such a great giggle with your comment :) thank you..

love Crim

wow this is great Crim!....what a metaphor for the great game of poker, which I actually played for a living for over a decade so this one has a special place on my favorites list now:)...many layers to it too, speaking to the domination that can take place in a relationship where it is all stacked against you and your value is little...great ending too...reminds me of a great line from the movie Rounders with Matt Damon and Edward Norton about card sharks; highly recommend if you haven't seen it. But Matt Damon's character says and I might be paraphrasing but "the golden rule is this; as soon as you know you are beat and can't win, fold; throw your cards in the middle and live to fight another day.".

Love M

thank you dearly Michael for the add and peek into your life.. appreciate that you got the nuances of this write.. I've not seen the movie all the way through but it is sound advise to fold before your completely had.. thank you again..

love Crim

every gambler hates playing against a cold deck, Crim;
lovers too. cute little ragdoll...

thank you John too true..

only a dolly concerning some as you know ;)

love Crim

Love the playing card metaphor and the last line is killer - *do you feel me?        
       
                                                                                         ~shivering in your cold embrace~ I really love this especially as you have used the word "Your" instead of "Our" that gives it so much power and direction :-)

thank you David I cherish your thoughts..

love Brenda

When in Rome...survive.
Then get the hell out.
I echo Michael's comment
regarding the metaphor.

I find it hard to believe no one has
quoted the Kenny Roger's song...
and I'll just leave it at that. :)

thank you most graciously good advise..

lol at the Kenny Rogers reference :)

love Crim

Brenda, this is so raw, and hard hitting.. and full of so much emotion.. like Taryn said, you'll never have to fold as long as we got your back.. we love you..



Dave

thank you Dave for the love on this write..

never fear if folding it will only be on a relationship..

love Brenda