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'Reincarnation...'
...She furiously
fucked me...
like
the second cumming-
"Oh Christ!!!!"
I screamed over, and over...
as creamy load, after load
erupted, profusely coating...
her hallowed walls...
then, drained
of all life's force...
she pulled me out,
lifeless...and snatched me
in-between
soft molten lips
and prepared,
to birth anew...
my hardened
reality...
which in turn
made me feel...
omnipotent...
fucked me...
like
the second cumming-
"Oh Christ!!!!"
I screamed over, and over...
as creamy load, after load
erupted, profusely coating...
her hallowed walls...
then, drained
of all life's force...
she pulled me out,
lifeless...and snatched me
in-between
soft molten lips
and prepared,
to birth anew...
my hardened
reality...
which in turn
made me feel...
omnipotent...
Published 29th Apr 2016
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29th Apr 2016 8:57pm
like a volcano Poe coming all over the page ;)
love this hot ink my friend..
love Crim
love this hot ink my friend..
love Crim
29th Apr 2016 9:28pm
Lol yea erupting lava lol thank u my sweetheart, truly appreciate your thought n support :)
29th Apr 2016 9:09pm
29th Apr 2016 9:35pm
Not half as delicious is those legs look in that pic. lol but I do thank you much my dear lady :) deeply grateful, always :)
29th Apr 2016 9:37pm
is that next to the evaporated milk in the grocery store 'cause i am not finding it & BELIEVE me I looked....lolol
29th Apr 2016 9:47pm
Nah dude I think you'll find it in your Grocer's freezer lol n yea, thanks for the laugh n the support :)
29th Apr 2016 9:47pm
29th Apr 2016 10:30pm
Hey then I must say you are a very lucky guy! lol n thanks for your time n thoughts :)
29th Apr 2016 10:47pm
then, drained
of all life's force..
Ain't that just right
Kill the beast hehe
In a loving way though
of all life's force..
Ain't that just right
Kill the beast hehe
In a loving way though
29th Apr 2016 11:24pm
Oh how sweet you are my dear, to kill him with a loving mouth mmmmm yea lol thank u sweetheart, appreciate u :)
Anonymous
29th Apr 2016 11:08pm
PM!! Needless to say this got me to raise a brow... You know me ltm...
"as creamy load, after load
erupted, profusely coating...
her hallowed walls...
then, drained
of all life's force..."
~ perfection!!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"as creamy load, after load
erupted, profusely coating...
her hallowed walls...
then, drained
of all life's force..."
~ perfection!!
With love - Taryn xoxo
29th Apr 2016 11:29pm
Aaaawww well you know me, n I'm nothing if not one who has an ocean of passion lol thank you my hot one, truly... :)
30th Apr 2016 3:40am
There's a subtle elegant piece to this that makes me read it over and over again
30th Apr 2016 3:51am
I Thank you for such a wonderful comment, n truly appreciate ur time n thoughts :)
30th Apr 2016 4:20am
Ahhhhh.. what man wouldn't die for this...ha!!!..damn did you lace this my brotha
30th Apr 2016 8:20am
Lol indeed what man wouldn't!? thanks a bunch bro. I just try to keep up you that fiery ink you spill so fluidly :) truly n always appreciated :)
30th Apr 2016 12:30pm
30th Apr 2016 2:20pm
Aaaawww... Well then CUM on all the way in!! lol thanks my dear Lady R, truly grateful for your thoughts n support :)
30th Apr 2016 1:15pm
My, my PM...why is it that I can visualize this so well...lol...this is the effect your words have on me ;)
30th Apr 2016 2:22pm
Well I'm happy you had a great view! lol, most definitely pleased to please u my dear :) n I thank you so much always :)
1st May 2016 10:08am
This is as hot as she was. It's a pleasure to read, but I'm sure the pleasure was all hers.
1st May 2016 10:16am
Well sadly SHE was only a fantasy of mind lol. But hey I can remember some looooooong ago pleasures lol
Thank you my friend, appreciate you :)
Thank you my friend, appreciate you :)
1st May 2016 12:28pm
1st May 2016 1:00pm
Anonymous
1st May 2016 4:16pm
Mmmmmm Poet.......this a sweet sexy write.......inked with passionate sensual ness.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st May 2016 6:40pm
The purple one! Aaww well I'm happy you thought so! n I'm grateful as always :)
1st May 2016 9:25pm
Gaaah, the Virgo blushed madly and looked away...then looked back! See, this is why I'm sometimes reluctant to read your words... I'm not so innocent but god, they shock me to hell...in a kinda good way. :) Enlightening...
2nd May 2016 00:21am
aawee!! Well I'm very proud of you for finding the courage to comment! lol n thank u bunches... Big hugs to u sweetie :)
2nd May 2016 3:33pm
2nd May 2016 8:52pm
Aaawww me no want you to get hurt beautiful, be careful... Lol n thanks bunches for the sweet comment n ur support. :)
2nd May 2016 6:11pm
2nd May 2016 8:54pm
Lol sweet grace... Thank you sooooo much for your continued support, I adore u :)
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2016 2:25am
7th May 2016 2:24am
I some re-incarnation in my life, damn you
myfreakylittlejaggedgods!
it must be me, you're making me yearn
it's been a little long day ;-/..
myfreakylittlejaggedgods!
it must be me, you're making me yearn
it's been a little long day ;-/..
7th May 2016 2:32am
Anonymous
7th May 2016 6:28pm
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7th May 2016 10:19pm
Thank u so much! I'm happy you liked n I'm so very flattered;) hopefully u will never be disappointed with a visit to my pages :)
27th May 2016 10:08am
27th May 2016 10:53am
Hadn't thought of it that way, but now I agree it could've been one! lol thank you, appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Jun 2016 3:46am
14th Jun 2016 2:06am
I sometimes tiptoe into your realm to see what's stirring...only to find out it's my blood. Which you have an uncanny ability to set fire to. Yet again I bow before your erotic prowess... 😉
Timid
Timid
14th Jun 2016 2:43am
