Take The Piss

Woman.

You make me want to shout to the fucking universe.
just to let you know how bulleting your words here
ricocheted with heat through me. I feel a bit riddled
and insane because ...This right here.. a queen's
wound, you own every inch of it and damn it!

We need to dance to them. Let us bow because I am
to your pen.  

I felt this, like I have never felt another woman's words  
before. As all shall be witness.



-Umph!

over the moon with smiles from your comment thank you graciously..

love Crim

It's deeply sad that you're still
into him. The piece reeks with a huge amount of self loathing from
a rejected n discontented soul...

no need to fear Poe not self loathing just a manic lady in lust..

thank you for your honest thoughts they are cherished..

love Crim

Welcome back precious Crim........such a deep write as only you can express such emotions with such fire within your soul.......feeling this.......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)

hugs you back beautiful Flower thank you for the love..

love Crim

A lot of people, myself included are happy to see your voice back .....

Like

thank you my dear friend Poet..

love Brenda

I prefer to keep you my friend

me too Kavik :)

love Brenda

thank you Todski for such a gracious comment..

love Crim

Crim Da La Crim, it is so good to hear
from you again... not necessarily with
the content that your stroke is pouring-out
of your heart though, but, still good.

I hope that everything turns-out to the best
for you and that you get all that you want.

  Namaste... Dantalion

Dearest Dantalion thank you for the love..

love Crim

I have no words to speak.
for your voice has said
enough for a universe of
us.

Merci,
-Howlings

thank you dearest soul for such a lovely comment..

love Crim

Wow! What a poem!  So passionate! Welcome back and hope all is well.

thank you Ed for the beautiful comment and welcome back yes all is well..

love Crim

the fire in you is still unquenchable.
passionate poetry, Crim..

thank you John my friend :)

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda,  making a re-entry as only you can... You have been sorely missed and I know you will continue to gain strength and rise as you have always.

"for lining up amongst all your groupies
licking up your cum soaked ink
that has a strong bitter bite
yet with a loving embrace as well"
~ these lines here my lovely one is your autobiography... I will always be one of "your" groupie gals... I love you

With love always - Taryn xoxo

my beautiful one I love you so much and I your groupie..

thank you for the continued love and support without which my wings may be forever plucked never to soar in the poetic ether again..

I love you xoxo Brenda

deep, raw and beautiful -  I have so missed you poems and your words - so powerful :-)

thank you David I've missed you all deeply as well..

love Brenda

Brenda, this ink just oozes your essence.. and how delightful that is.. like our sister, Taryn said.. i'm forever your groupie.. how this write took my breath away.. love always..



Dave

thank you Dave for seeing my soul in this write and I would follow you to the ends of the Earth..

love Brenda

thoughtful lust....
i know those words seem  
weird together
but its what this vibe
conjures in the mind..
..
like you mixed all
those milky sentiments
into a big bucket
threw them onto
the page letting the
words splash about
and just said:

"here,now mop that up"

i truly enjoyed this raw
and creative expression
of yourself,Crimson

grim and lovely indeed!

thank you graciously Naajir..

love Crim

you want me to break his legs? lol,missed your defiant self, thanx for returning...

thank you Dean for the warm welcome..

no I like the way his legs are lol..

love Crimsin