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If I Could Afford It I'd Be An Agoraphobic
An evil bitch resides inside my head
as soon as I leave the house
she starts to whisper about gas being on
and all my animals might be dead
I cant smother her antagonizing sound
no matter how I try I cant drown her out,
so you know I turn the fuck back around.
as soon as I leave the house
she starts to whisper about gas being on
and all my animals might be dead
I cant smother her antagonizing sound
no matter how I try I cant drown her out,
so you know I turn the fuck back around.
Published 8th Apr 2016
| Edited 16th Apr 2016
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8th Apr 2016 8:39pm
Better they do nothing more than get you to go back home. There are worse whisper they could be telling you to do... interesting read...
JJ
JJ
Anonymous
8th Apr 2016 9:36pm
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mistrust like that comes from a dark place with silence for a name & no face.....kick him in the balls & live freely...you will feel as if the wind...
9th Apr 2016 1:54am
hullo
that frst line has a hell of a dance to it, second eases into its own and so a flow is born for the body
....I hope you don't make a voodoo doll of me for this ...but jaysus, antagonizing is real long
anyhow. impressive, can learn from this
that frst line has a hell of a dance to it, second eases into its own and so a flow is born for the body
....I hope you don't make a voodoo doll of me for this ...but jaysus, antagonizing is real long
anyhow. impressive, can learn from this
9th Apr 2016 3:10pm
9th Apr 2016 3:51pm
15th Apr 2016 9:19pm
Did you mean to leave out apostrophes in the 'can't's? Also
I cant down her out,
Was it drown her out or down her out, as in repressing, holding the voice to dimmer versus shouting over with music or other stuff?
I like both. I like the bionic Nikki with a meta-cognitive approach, dimming what doesn't matter, but I also like the snarling razor-mouthed Joan Jett Nikki screaming it down.
I cant down her out,
Was it drown her out or down her out, as in repressing, holding the voice to dimmer versus shouting over with music or other stuff?
I like both. I like the bionic Nikki with a meta-cognitive approach, dimming what doesn't matter, but I also like the snarling razor-mouthed Joan Jett Nikki screaming it down.
