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Power in a Poet's Words
A poet has a heightened imagination
unrestrained and never confined
because it’s hard to free our intimate thoughts
when we’re restricting our minds.
So we disrobe on paper and strip on stage
wearing only words.
We stitch thoughts that become fabrics of emotions
cloaked in poetic apparel from tailor-made experiences
with the sweat of our pen’s brow.
Speaking sentiments, amplifying metaphors-
making those cognitive explosions surge fluently,
syllables curved mental images just to get through to them.
We paint images for readers to inhale the words we speak
breathe in the verbs, strengthen the depth of their lungs
and fill their rib cage with calligraphy impressions.
We become sorcerers that conceal and confess between
the seams of lines,
manipulate lyrics to advocate impartiality
because words just can’t choose sides.
We vent our frustrations, rant our rage…
celebrate our joys, then pen some of our worst days.
We created fantasies that becomes an observer’s wet dream
molest others flesh with passion from residue of
spouses, lovers and distant flames’ reminiscent steam.
Our muses manipulate the tempo within our poetry
but it’s more than that.
Spectators can fill emotions vibrating in our souls,
ascribe to secrets un-kept,
the results that spills out when the cause is erect.
We ink the symphonies of strife, quill the orchestras of our life
and unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words…
or listen attentively to the tremor of emotions in our voice.
There’s power in a poet’s words...
Rain~
Revamped- Oct, 1, 2013
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/129549-a-poets-power/
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Re. Power in a Poet's Words
Anonymous
4th Apr 2016 2:17am
You Sexy Lady always have the power within your words......no matter the write......I enjoyed this a lot as usual......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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7th Apr 2016 4:42am
hey flower, thank you hun....we all have power in words when used right. I appreciateya! xo
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 3:28am
The power to vent, to split, to fuse, to excite and shut down....all in a poets work...though you were trying to leave me lol!!!! :) PS posted a collab with LokiOfLiterati ..trying to get my flow back!! :)
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....emotions in motion = poetry. ;) Thank you Shell, being missing you! Happy to see you around more....
-and you know I already checked your new ink out.... :)
-and you know I already checked your new ink out.... :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 3:31am
Amen ...you have captured the true meaning of poetry my beautiful souled friend....once again i bow to you :)
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.....curtsey bow to you sir. ;) Thank you T! Adore that she made your list....
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 4:12am
Power indeed but at the same time we are vulnerable wearing our emotions on our sleeve.
But all in all, its the only way we know how to express and its our therapy.
You captured everything we are all about and more, wonderful ink Ms. Rain, i much enjoyed your poetic pen.
But all in all, its the only way we know how to express and its our therapy.
You captured everything we are all about and more, wonderful ink Ms. Rain, i much enjoyed your poetic pen.
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...and I think that's when poetry is so potent; when we're vulnerable, when we undress our thoughts and our emotions are exposed. It also showcases our strength and courage to be so defenseless, so unprotected, and naked, all while having a strong voice through words. So happy you enjoyed, jasmine..... :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 8:12am
damn rainy lady, i'm sort of dumbstruck really ltm
sort of the same effect that robert frost quote always has on me
“A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong,
a homesickness, a lovesickness.”
^^^^^^
then you have to make others feel it with you ...
... which you do over {&} over again
loved this
xo
sort of the same effect that robert frost quote always has on me
“A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong,
a homesickness, a lovesickness.”
^^^^^^
then you have to make others feel it with you ...
... which you do over {&} over again
loved this
xo
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....if I left 'you' speechless,....then my objective has been met. I can pack my shit and go home now; shows over,... because you are truly a poet that is hard to silence. :) Thank you beautiful....
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 9:11am
Ahhh, Rain, luv ~ :-*
The way you write about poetry is incomparable. Each time you explore the topic I find you compelling, riveting, astute.
Your exploration of poetry from initial thought to pen to poet to presentation and aspects, nuances in between is eductive and extraordinary.
Thank you for sharing all you do, luv. You and your brilliance are deeply appreciated. :-*
The way you write about poetry is incomparable. Each time you explore the topic I find you compelling, riveting, astute.
Your exploration of poetry from initial thought to pen to poet to presentation and aspects, nuances in between is eductive and extraordinary.
Thank you for sharing all you do, luv. You and your brilliance are deeply appreciated. :-*
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Re: Re. Power in a Poet's Words
6th Apr 2016 6:02pm
....hey there Savaja, ya know I'm cool with a one sentence response, right?! ;) Love your energy through commentary though. Thanks for the supportive response... xo
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7th Apr 2016 1:24am
I know, luv. :-*
And, I thank you so very much for reminding me to take care of myself.
You are a gem.
And, I thank you so very much for reminding me to take care of myself.
You are a gem.
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Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 9:26am
easy to become beguiled by a poem's lushness,
when it's right there naked on the stage...
when it's right there naked on the stage...
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6th Apr 2016 5:56pm
Very easy, especially when the image is vivid and the emotions are tangible. A smile always spreads across my face when I see you knocking at my front door. Thanks John!
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 9:44am
The jury has spoken n you my dear are GUILTY... As being poetically BRILLIANT!!! Still packin that impact of a first time read :)
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6th Apr 2016 5:48pm
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 10:41am
My dear Tara, thank you for describing me and my writing so perfectly, lol. Actually, this poem is perfect. It makes me wish I were a time travelling plagiarist so I could take this poem back with me and post it before you wrote it to claim it as my own. How terrible of me to steal from you. I would be overwhelmed with guilt. So I must be satisfied with being deeply moved by your words and allow you to be moved by the words of praise and admiration of your fellow poets who all recognize each line and every perfectly placed word of this self portrait as a masterpiece of verse that each of us wishes we had been the poet that penned it. There is not one syllable that did not move me in this work of art!
JJ
JJ
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lol....but it's the truth JJ. This ink describes many on here.(you're definitely one of those poets I'm speaking of. ) It is a revamped piece from back in 2013. I felt like revisiting it with aged eyes and a deeper appreciation for who we are as poets, and what small changes can occur via written language.
I just love your comment! You always leave remnants of your charm behind whenever you stop by. Adore you... and thanks for keeping her. xo
I just love your comment! You always leave remnants of your charm behind whenever you stop by. Adore you... and thanks for keeping her. xo
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
Anonymous
4th Apr 2016 6:35pm
Sonsista, there most certainly is power behind all words (as you and I have discussed at length) and we can encapsulate them all in the most beautiful and passionate ways...in honesty with fear and vulnerability, in the unknowing of how they will be received...something which you do magnificently.
Pen salute and deep respect always -
Your Lady T xoxo
Pen salute and deep respect always -
Your Lady T xoxo
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6th Apr 2016 5:06pm
I agree 100% Lady T! Your comment was spot on! Poetry is such a beautiful way to express ourselves and when others are feeling the vibrations in our words, they can be used as tools to get through certain life situations that may be difficult for them. (we are lyrical motivational speakers. HA!) Thank you.... :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
4th Apr 2016 8:43pm
You embody this power beautifully with both passion and skill.
"We ink the symphonies of strife, quill the orchestras of our life
and unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words… "
The poet inks his emotions with as much skill as he or she can then hopes for the best. It can be a catharsis that others identify with, and that's a reward for both the writer and reader. It can be an intimate and rewarding exchange. Fine work Rain!
"We ink the symphonies of strife, quill the orchestras of our life
and unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words… "
The poet inks his emotions with as much skill as he or she can then hopes for the best. It can be a catharsis that others identify with, and that's a reward for both the writer and reader. It can be an intimate and rewarding exchange. Fine work Rain!
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6th Apr 2016 4:53pm
I concur Crow! We pen our thoughts and emotions in hopes of pushing and lifting ourselves, not knowing the positive effect our words have on others. Thank you for the visit....
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4th Apr 2016 9:56pm
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Thank you S_Song! That was definitely the point. It's great seeing you in my area code... and I appreciate the listing :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
5th Apr 2016 3:59pm
HellaGood! Fantastic in so many ways. and absolutely true. You are a genius
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Re: Re. Power in a Poet's Words
6th Apr 2016 4:44pm
Wow 3P! Totally not a genius, but since you're giving out the title, I'll happily wear it for a few hours. lol.... Humbled, thanks!
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5th Apr 2016 9:40pm
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Re. Power in a Poet's Words
7th Apr 2016 9:47pm
yes indeed i definitely witness the power in a Poet's words right here... what a beautiful gem you created... you're phenomenal Tara :D
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Re: Re. Power in a Poet's Words
7th Apr 2016 10:51pm
*blushing*
So pleased you could feel my words, Magic! You're too kind sir, and thanks for listing her. Appreciateya! :)
So pleased you could feel my words, Magic! You're too kind sir, and thanks for listing her. Appreciateya! :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
Anonymous
9th Apr 2016 4:39am
Rain, this is simply divine.. the trials of living a poets life.. sorry poetess as well.. an enigma we are.. into the list it goes.. nicely done..
Dave
Dave
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9th Apr 2016 4:45am
Dave, you have just ended my night on a soprano note. I've been waiting on your presence to grace my page for quite some time now, and I'm elated by the visit. Thank you sir, and appreciate you keeping her.... :)
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
9th Apr 2016 7:39pm
yep, this is so sublime i'm speechless, but everything everyone above said, go goddess...
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Re: Re. Power in a Poet's Words
27th Apr 2016 10:20pm
....thanks luv..... appreciate your eyes resting on her. Thanks for keeping her...
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
27th Apr 2016 3:42pm
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27th Apr 2016 10:22pm
Oh I love that Jazz......and they do. Poetry is quite powerful! Thanks luv.....
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
5th Jul 2016 8:47pm
Yes!! Yes!! & Yes!!! and you captured what a poet is and the effects our writes can have on the readers... We pen pieces that grip the emotions of those that are quietly listening or reading and they wonder wow! how does she know, I can relate so well to what she is saying..... They feel our emotions because lyrically we paint the picture with words with imagery and we transport them to that moment in time where scene by scene it plays out in their mind... I absolutely love this.... It's also our way to release but people don't realize that when our words get trapped in our head and we can't find the way to transcribe them on paper their is a dying inside that words can't express because writers block is no joke... That's what I have been dealing with the past few years writers block and the words so desperately needs to seep out more then once in a while.... Enough of my long winded comment... Bottom line I absolutely loved it....
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11th Jul 2016 4:11am
Wow BSavvy! You really put some thought and detail into your comment and it's quite refreshing to receive. I completely agree with every single word.
Thank you for the amazing comment...and cyber listing her. Appreciateya immensely! xo
Thank you for the amazing comment...and cyber listing her. Appreciateya immensely! xo
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
23rd Jul 2016 4:39am
Amen! Your words illicit a complex arraignment of thoughts when one writes their heart out! Bravo! I also tried to comment on a poem you posted on a thread, but I don't think I did it right :( it was called Peel Back The Skin and See. Absolutely loved it! Should post it once the competition is through!
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23rd Jul 2016 7:05pm
Hi there jenny! Such a pleasure to log on to dup and feel your positive energy and poetic vibe on my page. Your commentary is very inspiring and I thank you for reading and listing this piece.
Pleased you decided to subscribe as well, I'm looking forward to the lyrical connection and observing your art. :)
Per the 'Peel Back The Skin' poem, it was actually posted on my former page Rain1Courtel(RainC) ...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/231264-peel-back-the-skin-and-see/
*I'm no longer active on that page and I disabled the comments on each poem but I do believe you can still add it to your reading list if you like. Thanks so much for stopping by Jen! xo
Pleased you decided to subscribe as well, I'm looking forward to the lyrical connection and observing your art. :)
Per the 'Peel Back The Skin' poem, it was actually posted on my former page Rain1Courtel(RainC) ...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/231264-peel-back-the-skin-and-see/
*I'm no longer active on that page and I disabled the comments on each poem but I do believe you can still add it to your reading list if you like. Thanks so much for stopping by Jen! xo
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24th Jul 2016 4:40am
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
31st Jul 2016 4:37am
Speechless... you have a way with words beyond compare, this is so beautifully put ♥
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31st Jul 2016 5:21am
I'm speechless by your response Duende! Thank you for the poetic love and for adding her to your cyber-shelf.
I also want to thank you for the subscribe. I'm definitely looking forward to reading you based on your name alone, and your bio description. Cool stuff! xo
I also want to thank you for the subscribe. I'm definitely looking forward to reading you based on your name alone, and your bio description. Cool stuff! xo
Re. Power in a Poet's Words
31st Jul 2016 5:56am
You're very welcome!
Thank you for the subscribe and for mentioning my name... the meaning of Duende means a lot to me!
Thank you for the subscribe and for mentioning my name... the meaning of Duende means a lot to me!
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