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Being right - a poem about my Mom
My Mom had the most common sense of anyone I've ever known
She was right about everything, so much so, it was infuriating at times
I bucked her many times thinking I knew better
Which of course I didn't , I was no match for her
The only thing she wasn't right about
Was her need to always be right
She didnt go looking for problems to solve
Situations presented themselves and she always had the answers
Somewhere in my 50s I discovered the joy of not being right all the time
Like her, I possess great common sense
There is a burden however for always trying to be right
If you are never wrong, how do you learn from your mistakes I asked
I'm not sure she saw my logic
Being the matriarch, being right was burned in
It's been 15 months since her passing
I miss her greatly and could use a few answers, right or wrong but probably right ...
She was right about everything, so much so, it was infuriating at times
I bucked her many times thinking I knew better
Which of course I didn't , I was no match for her
The only thing she wasn't right about
Was her need to always be right
She didnt go looking for problems to solve
Situations presented themselves and she always had the answers
Somewhere in my 50s I discovered the joy of not being right all the time
Like her, I possess great common sense
There is a burden however for always trying to be right
If you are never wrong, how do you learn from your mistakes I asked
I'm not sure she saw my logic
Being the matriarch, being right was burned in
It's been 15 months since her passing
I miss her greatly and could use a few answers, right or wrong but probably right ...
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 1:38am
Ahhh, Granite, luv ~ :-*
I so can relate to this one. You write it exceeding well, mon cher. Exceeding well... :-*
I so can relate to this one. You write it exceeding well, mon cher. Exceeding well... :-*
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 1:42am
Thank you, thank you
it was easy to write, almost wrote itself
Appreciate the street cred
it was easy to write, almost wrote itself
Appreciate the street cred
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 2:54am
The only thing I can say is this is fantastic!
Ok here's more....This touched my heart in so many ways and brought a big smile to my face at the end! Your mom sounds like she was a wonderful woman. I'm sorry for your loss Poet and I thank you for this excellent read! 😊
Ok here's more....This touched my heart in so many ways and brought a big smile to my face at the end! Your mom sounds like she was a wonderful woman. I'm sorry for your loss Poet and I thank you for this excellent read! 😊
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Re: Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 3:48am
Thank you Tommie
She was quite a woman, ball of fire comes to mind but loving as the day is long
Your comment thrills me !!!!
She was quite a woman, ball of fire comes to mind but loving as the day is long
Your comment thrills me !!!!
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Re: Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 3:50am
I'm always looking over my shoulder to see if she is there
You're right though she still is my adviser
Thx S
Xo
You're right though she still is my adviser
Thx S
Xo
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Re: Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 4:03am
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 10:05am
Poet your mom sounds like she was a great force in many lives..
deeply loved by you..
sending my love your way..
xo Brenda
deeply loved by you..
sending my love your way..
xo Brenda
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Re: Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 1:15pm
Thanks Brenda
She was a force for doing the the right thing. She could be very tough but her heart was always in the right place. She tried to protect us and she did a darn god job.
Appreciate the comment
Xo
She was a force for doing the the right thing. She could be very tough but her heart was always in the right place. She tried to protect us and she did a darn god job.
Appreciate the comment
Xo
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 11:12am
yeah, I picture my self right here in this poem, and my argument with ma mama. nice piece.
SENA
SENA
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
24th Feb 2016 1:15pm
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
25th Feb 2016 10:54pm
Love this Poet ... a beautiful tribute per se to your Mum ...
My kids sometimes reflect something similar ...
My kids sometimes reflect something similar ...
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
26th Feb 2016 3:10am
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
26th Feb 2016 3:44pm
Re: Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
27th Feb 2016 4:46am
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
I'm sorry to hear about your mom poet. I lost my own just over two years ago. Talk about matriarch, a loving lioness always looking out for her clan and others. Your poem really touched me because it reminded me so much of my wise, hard headed, loving mother. It still hurts too much to write of her though. I do hope I'll be able to one day. (Tears in my eyes now as I comment.) She's always with me though. Just as your mom is with you. Spirits that strong never stay quiet. ;-) Sending big hugs your way.
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
27th Feb 2016 4:49am
Glad you could feel it
I'm still in a lot of pain
My mom was suffering at the end and glad she is not suffering now but her spirit while with me is missed. Tough as nails but sweet as a daisy.
Really good yo hear from you
xoxo
I'm still in a lot of pain
My mom was suffering at the end and glad she is not suffering now but her spirit while with me is missed. Tough as nails but sweet as a daisy.
Really good yo hear from you
xoxo
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
27th Feb 2016 8:39pm
simply love this but find it drives me to jealousy in that by the sound of things I wish your mum had been my mum - unfortunately my mum was a useless violent bible bashing drunk - such is life :-)
A fitting tribute - I am sure she must be proud :-)
A fitting tribute - I am sure she must be proud :-)
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
27th Feb 2016 9:29pm
Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
10th Mar 2016 6:28pm
This is a beautiful poem and one of those 'great finds' on this site. It's honest, raw and unpretentious. It doesn't offer any answers but the question(s) you allude to lingers far after you're finished reading.
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Re. Being right - a poem about my Mom
10th Mar 2016 6:53pm