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Phoenix
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I am here with you through this
veiled titian night, of native heat
moving, without sly moonlight's
presence, of a new bewitchment,
seeking enrichment; amber sips
the drops of essence, sliding
residing, the horizon of this eye
peering out at me, it's tongue,
a darting spear, as both tips of
reptilian stealth meet, inching,
moving through the jungle of your
hair, hiding there, watching you
twitch and rise, seeking out the
contraction around your thickness,
consuming all of its bounty,
even as the glowing fire in your
belly torches the slender quick-
ness of my viper to your snake,
it takes little else in the darkest
regions of musk, till I rise up
through your sex like a phoenix.
©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
This was entered in a DUP competition.
I am here with you through this
veiled titian night, of native heat
moving, without sly moonlight's
presence, of a new bewitchment,
seeking enrichment; amber sips
the drops of essence, sliding
residing, the horizon of this eye
peering out at me, it's tongue,
a darting spear, as both tips of
reptilian stealth meet, inching,
moving through the jungle of your
hair, hiding there, watching you
twitch and rise, seeking out the
contraction around your thickness,
consuming all of its bounty,
even as the glowing fire in your
belly torches the slender quick-
ness of my viper to your snake,
it takes little else in the darkest
regions of musk, till I rise up
through your sex like a phoenix.
©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
This was entered in a DUP competition.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 23rd Feb 2016
| Edited 24th Feb 2016
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Re. Phoenix
23rd Feb 2016 6:36am
Such a strong and sensuous poem you made here Jade,
It didn't have to be vulgar or upfront it made its point across quite perfectly.
Well done :)
It didn't have to be vulgar or upfront it made its point across quite perfectly.
Well done :)
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Re: Re. Phoenix
23rd Feb 2016 11:10pm
Why thank you so much, dear MsRocky-Rock, I'm touched whenever someone enjoys my style of erotic poetry. Your appreciation means a lot. --Jadey💌
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2016 2:19pm
Jade-Pandora,
Once more you have given rise. through the fire of your words, to so much more....
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Once more you have given rise. through the fire of your words, to so much more....
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Re. Phoenix
23rd Feb 2016 11:35pm
Thank you so, tornado, for your wonderful support, always. Embracing my ink beyond what things would seem, and a reader to find a gem.
-- Jadey
-- Jadey
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Re: Re. Phoenix
23rd Feb 2016 11:40pm
Thank you ever so much, Wally. I too have always been intrigued by the legend, and to have it in a poem was an "ah ha" moment for me.
-- Jadey
-- Jadey
Re. Phoenix
23rd Feb 2016 10:16pm
You must get tired of all the compliments to your potent talent Jade and yet I must tire you once again with my own. You take the story of the wanting and eagerness for sex and bring it to life in a new and wonderful way. Bravo.
John
John
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Re: Re. Phoenix
24th Feb 2016 1:05am
John, I'm always learning & growing in my word craft, so when it comes to receiving feedback from fellow artists/writers, and readers in general, anything can represent a gift to me. I appreciate your always supportive words. Never underestimate your impact on someone. -- Jadey🌾
Re. Phoenix
24th Feb 2016 1:29am
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24th Feb 2016 6:59am
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25th Feb 2016 1:56am
Re. Phoenix
26th Feb 2016 00:42am
I am here with you through this
veiled titian night, of native heat
moving, without sly moonlight's
presence, of a new bewitchment,
seeking enrichment; amber sips
the drops of essence, sliding
I absolutely love this opening...
veiled titan night...
Great construction...
geoff
veiled titian night, of native heat
moving, without sly moonlight's
presence, of a new bewitchment,
seeking enrichment; amber sips
the drops of essence, sliding
I absolutely love this opening...
veiled titan night...
Great construction...
geoff
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Re. Phoenix
27th Feb 2016 4:58pm
There's true passion captured here Jade - cool/hot write
"Amber sips..."
Evocative
"Amber sips..."
Evocative
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Re: Re. Phoenix
28th Feb 2016 7:11am
Thank you dear friend whale - if I may address you as such -- your words shared with me are an honor. Gratitude. -- Jade
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