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Brinell Scale
1.
It was euphony exhausting
Flutter fandango, the timbre
Of pleasure perched on the sails
Of an impossible surrender.
It was timelessness
Nudging a remembrance
Citing couplet rhymes.
It was myrtle and myrrh
Waiting for fate to capture
The scent that was ours.
It was a soiree affair
A dance that began
The succession
Of stumbling before
Birds woke to spread
Buttercream frosting
Across a rising song
Resembling us;
Limp half-notes parading,
Just shy of gait and truth.
2.
I fumble through the gorge
Of emotions hoping rhythm
Strengthens my resolve
Into an early rebirth
That forgoes annuals
For something year round,
Dusty, weathered and raw.
I rise upon a season
That engages change.
When I find my simple voice
Without slur or pain
I'll sing my own song.
Bathe with evening birds
From Watering troughs,
Dry with towels of sun
Rolling toward mountains
Across my flushed skin.
Hike through sagebrush
One canyon at a time,
Capturing my solitary scent
As it dots the landscape.
Measure the brinell hardness
Across the spine of forgiveness,
and fully reap my own vineyard.
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Re. Brinell Scale
14th Feb 2016 7:52am
it's always good to know how much our armor can withstand.
so properly harvested...
so properly harvested...
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Re. Brinell Scale
14th Feb 2016 10:40am
Brinell hardness a true test I understand ( or do I ? )I have read thisd several times in quick succession,must read again Thankylu Ahavati
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14th Feb 2016 11:20am
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14th Feb 2016 11:54am
So refreshing , relatable my
lady, to inhale of such vastness
and nature provided here.
Beautifully centre'stood
-'Howlings
lady, to inhale of such vastness
and nature provided here.
Beautifully centre'stood
-'Howlings
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14th Feb 2016 2:22pm
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15th Feb 2016 1:08am
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Anonymous
15th Feb 2016 5:23am
Ah, Lady Ahavati. . .you've inspired me to step outside & smell the roses. . .This is a beautiful [inner] reflection (if it may be?) standing over your ink`d pond. . .~xo, Devlin.
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Re. Brinell Scale
15th Feb 2016 9:01am
I love the contrast in mood between stanzas one and two. And yes, the forgiveness of self (with it's Brinell hardness of 10) is so necessary to finding the self.
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While I completely agree with your astute observation regarding self forgiveness being a necessary element of finding oneself, it is not applicable in this verse. Though, I can see how you might conclude such, as self-forgiveness does seem to be the most hardened to crack. But, not always. There are some things worse.Thank you for your comment.
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15th Feb 2016 10:47pm
Thank you. I will read and read again. My comment says a lot about where I'm at (of course!) and forgiveness of self is a toughie. Every time I think I'm there a new situation arises and shows me I'm not...
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16th Feb 2016 2:11am
I've been thinking about how I could respond to this, and I had the perfect answer regarding unforgiveness rearing its ugly head. But, then I was interrupted and have forgotten. It was an analogy...a good one too. I hope I remember it soon.
In the interim, stay honest, always. It's the surefire way to avoid the guilt that leads to unforgiveness in the future. Honesty may hurt once, sometimes knocking you to your feet with the breath knocked out of you. But a lie, well that hurts every time you remember it.
We all screw up; we're human. Admitting it honestly takes courage, and enables you to move forward honestly.
In the interim, stay honest, always. It's the surefire way to avoid the guilt that leads to unforgiveness in the future. Honesty may hurt once, sometimes knocking you to your feet with the breath knocked out of you. But a lie, well that hurts every time you remember it.
We all screw up; we're human. Admitting it honestly takes courage, and enables you to move forward honestly.
Re. Brinell Scale
15th Feb 2016 9:49pm
One line at a time - one step at a time - staccato and seemingly faltering - we get there when... We know we are there
This one read/rode like a dressage pony let wild
This one read/rode like a dressage pony let wild
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Re. Brinell Scale
5th Mar 2016 4:16pm
I will come back to this one
with a little rouge in hand.
Loving this and must read
again, in a quiet space.
-Howlings
with a little rouge in hand.
Loving this and must read
again, in a quiet space.
-Howlings
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