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Fuckin train ride....

I didn't need to know that the butch, spanish chick,    
          the friend met in lock up,    
           was your beloved...    
Or that you slept  with your baby's daddy    
          just to piss off his new chick ...   
You felt the need to call her    
          just so she knew ...   
You walking downstairs naked    
        while they talked    
           served what purpose...?    
That dumb bitch they were talking about was...    
                          YOU    
Why were you there in the first place    
           He'd moved on   
        Why couldn't you....    
   
While he could have just kept his dick in his pants    
You serving as a cum dump wasn't a better idea either; just saying...  
   
I don't understand how asking a group of strangers on a train    
      If anyone was currently on public assistance , SSI or Medicare    
        was a good marketing strategy  ...  
    Your trying to sell cell phone plans    
      
If you can't control your children    
    leave them home  
    OR    
    Don't have them...  
   
I saw the frustration in her face when you slapped your older child ...  
                               I felt her pain    
Not from being hit but her questioning...    
      Why were you so mean to me ...
    
All this information from a thirty minute fuckin train ride    
   
It's a public place however , I should be afforded some degree of peace...    
            Free from listening to dumb shit ...  
Lets be clear here...    
That shits not colorful or a part of urban life...  
Its fuckin annoying...    
A fuckin ride where I was just trying to have a minute to myself...
Written by newdaddy56
Published | Edited 6th Dec 2020
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