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Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 10:42am
A piece about farewell and a piece about a new beginning or better perhaps, a probing.
Gray hair Rumspringa - got me inspired to read about the Rumspringa ...
A thought-provoking haiku, G_W.
Gray hair Rumspringa - got me inspired to read about the Rumspringa ...
A thought-provoking haiku, G_W.
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 3:32pm
Thank you Miss Chi! Writing poetry is essentially my mid-life-crisis mistress or sports car :)
Re: Re. SLOW RISE
2nd Feb 2016 11:14am
That's actually a very good way to canalize this upsetting condition :-). My husband's mistress is a BMW s1000 rr :-)!
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Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 6:39pm
Yeah, you have a lock on haiku's GW for sure!
I too had to look up RumSpringa, very Interesting")
Thanks for sharing
((((((GW))))))
Zazzles xo
I too had to look up RumSpringa, very Interesting")
Thanks for sharing
((((((GW))))))
Zazzles xo
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 11:34pm
Thank you so much, Ms. Jackie. I enjoy the challenge of cramming a bunch of meaning into 17 syllables. I was reminded of the Rumspringa tradition when I watchyed an episode of Longmire that featured the practice.
Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 8:48pm
Love this GW!
Rumspringa is big in these parts!
Now you got me making a list for summer!
Great little write my friend 😊
Rumspringa is big in these parts!
Now you got me making a list for summer!
Great little write my friend 😊
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 11:42pm
Tommie, thank you! I was actually wondering if you had the Amish or Mennonites in your neck of the woods. Upstate NY seems like it would suit their purposes well. I'm sure you've provoked more than a few "OH MY's" from the Rumspringa youths :)
Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 9:22pm
It's never too late to feel the summer breeze, or sew the winter oats. Sweetly writ, blue angel
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 11:44pm
Thank you Blue! You are right. I was just lost in the thralls of self pity :) I got better.
Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 9:52pm
:D
for some reason your poem reminded me of this song i really like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-n-NMeoloY0
and i enjoyed the write through and through, very well written. very creative.
for some reason your poem reminded me of this song i really like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-n-NMeoloY0
and i enjoyed the write through and through, very well written. very creative.
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
29th Jan 2016 11:50pm
Umm, thank you! They have an awesom, unique sound...thanks for the introduction to their music. I am glad you liked the poem.
Re. SLOW RISE
24th Feb 2016 2:21pm
I had to look up Rumspringa, but as a mid-life adult with a woefully adolescent attitude, I really appreciate the sentiment! Nicely written.
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Re: Re. SLOW RISE
24th Feb 2016 9:59pm
We struggle with the same happy condition. Thank you for letting me know that I'm not alone.