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Sunsoaked
Tag-along girls on a man’s day of leisure
Never seemed strange at the time
We relished the freedom of a day in the sun
Running, long grass whipping our legs
and mud in our toes
Your Dad’s airplanes whizzing above in the clear air
competing with the sound of cicadas
The river was wide and ours to explore
In retrospect I think
your Mom must have enjoyed the quiet we left her with
The opportunity to brace herself
for all the frogs we would bring home
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Re. Sunsoaked
22nd Jan 2016 6:42am
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22nd Jan 2016 1:56pm
Endless days, they were....probably only happened 2 or 3 times but they made an impression. I don't remember arriving....or leaving....or even eating....just timelessness and freedom and nature.
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25th Jan 2016 3:20am
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22nd Jan 2016 8:20pm
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25th Jan 2016 3:21am
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24th Jan 2016 6:12am
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25th Jan 2016 3:24am
lol
Usually set free into the local stream after a day or two.
Except for the bullfrog who wouldn't fit in the ice cream bucket - he was strictly catch & release - never made it home.
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Usually set free into the local stream after a day or two.
Except for the bullfrog who wouldn't fit in the ice cream bucket - he was strictly catch & release - never made it home.
Thanks for visiting!
Re. Sunsoaked
25th Jan 2016 3:14am
The fresh details really bring home the sweet nostalgic vibe . Good job !
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25th Jan 2016 3:25am