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Sometimes I Wish Instead Of
Sometimes I wish I were simple
Sometimes I wish I saw the moon as something far away
Instead of a division between the darkness I know and the light that lies beyond this point, which is ever so close but seems to be unattainable
Sometimes I wish I saw puddles as bodies of water
Instead of a sad reflection which reveals the deepest parts of me that are all too shallow
Sometimes I wish I saw a happy face
Instead of a sad one
Sometimes I wish I saw the moon as something far away
Instead of a division between the darkness I know and the light that lies beyond this point, which is ever so close but seems to be unattainable
Sometimes I wish I saw puddles as bodies of water
Instead of a sad reflection which reveals the deepest parts of me that are all too shallow
Sometimes I wish I saw a happy face
Instead of a sad one
Published 29th Dec 2015
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29th Dec 2015 1:39am
Oh wow...that's deep ..especially the part of puddles depicting your essence and how you describe the deepest parts of yourself as close to the surface...I can relate to this...nice write
29th Dec 2015 2:18am
This is brilliant! You hooked me with the opening line and took me on a journey through the shallows to the depths and beyond! Great work!
26th Feb 2016 6:30pm
