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A WANNABE...
I wanna be a rock star, Not just any old rock star either. I wannabe a smashing, successful billionaire with respect kinda rock star. ¤ I've practiced and practiced so I'd be a sure success. I've bruised many ears black and blue, yeah, even mine to. ¤ Memorizing the lyrics, what a snap to do. Singing along so the notes and tones are tried and true. ¤ I tried to ask Santa man once, even brave enough to sing a note or two. Why that rude, CHERRY cheeked jolly old man, he just ho ho ho'd. I jest you not, tis sad but true. ¤ When that beat hits my toes, gotta shake my money maker till I bout turn
blue. Feel as free as a gypsy traveling thru. ¤ Dude, I got soul to. Emotions known only to the good lord come wailing thru. So, see I'm tellin you, I've got it all. To Hollywood I'm ready to jet. ¤ But a wannabe is all I'll ever be. See, while shaking my money maker, I butt dialed the record button. Oh lordy lordy, did I ever deceive me. ¤ My money maker a shaking, has put quite the fright in me and Caterwauling is the only gift gifted to me. With not a hint of talent, you see, a wannabe is all I'll ever be. ¤
blue. Feel as free as a gypsy traveling thru. ¤ Dude, I got soul to. Emotions known only to the good lord come wailing thru. So, see I'm tellin you, I've got it all. To Hollywood I'm ready to jet. ¤ But a wannabe is all I'll ever be. See, while shaking my money maker, I butt dialed the record button. Oh lordy lordy, did I ever deceive me. ¤ My money maker a shaking, has put quite the fright in me and Caterwauling is the only gift gifted to me. With not a hint of talent, you see, a wannabe is all I'll ever be. ¤
Published 24th Dec 2015
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24th Dec 2015 8:48pm
I wanna be a drummer but I the worst at multitasking. But I'll keep dreaming and I'll air dum anyways. Lol but I say you rock on if that's what you wanna do. You drop an album I'll buy lol
24th Dec 2015 9:10pm
LoL. It was my first attempt at being funny. It was actually fun writing it! Thanx! (We could get a band together) LoL😄
24th Dec 2015 10:31pm
Lol It was funny made me laugh so you passed with flying colors! And hell yeah sounds good to me! Your vocalist I'll be drummer and whether he knows it or not sinister can be guitarist lol
24th Dec 2015 11:07pm
Cool! David Macleod's a wannabe dancer, he'll be our back up dancer! Fuck billionaires, we'll be trillionares! Lol➰
24th Dec 2015 11:43pm
24th Dec 2015 9:09pm
I am a wannabe too - I wanted to be a dancer and in my day was quite a good dancer but I wish I had been a professional dancer - a bit late now (lol)
Truth is, you can still be content being a wannabe, I know I am as i now sit and watch others dance the night away, knowing that once upon a time I was so much better than that (lol) :-)
really interesting departure for you, really loved this man :-)
Truth is, you can still be content being a wannabe, I know I am as i now sit and watch others dance the night away, knowing that once upon a time I was so much better than that (lol) :-)
really interesting departure for you, really loved this man :-)
24th Dec 2015 9:25pm
I played with the lay out, is it any better? This was my first attempt at being funny, it wasn't draining and it was fun. Some of it, of course, was CHERRY'S input. I'm still a wannabe, even 'ol blue eyes leaves me be LoL. It's funnier than hell but at least I'm in ecstasy for a bit🎤! Thank you David, I always appreciate your feedback! ➰
24th Dec 2015 11:52pm
i wannbe playing my guitar but i broke it instead of a cold hearted bitches face who elowed me,
25th Dec 2015 00:00am
Air guitar works good! We make it big, we'll buy you all the guitars you want!! LoL
