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Chasing sun
I run in the the rain for a long time
I am drenched and I am cold
Covered in muck and grime
The storm will pass so I'm told
Like bullets they rain down on me
But I don't feel them for I am numb
It doesn't let up, refusing to let me be
But the worst has yet to come
Snowstorm starts and it's hard to see
The sun plays peekaboo
Just beyond the big oak tree
Disappearing, never fully in view
I imagine the warmth on my skin
I almost feel my heart defrost
I just want to feel alive again
And get back all that was lost
I'm just a girl chasing sun
Just wanting to feel something real
My past I've tried to outrun
To cover up and failing to conceal
But I know I'll make it there
I'll bask in the sun and all it's glory
Stripping naked I'll lay bare
All my scars that tell of my story
I am drenched and I am cold
Covered in muck and grime
The storm will pass so I'm told
Like bullets they rain down on me
But I don't feel them for I am numb
It doesn't let up, refusing to let me be
But the worst has yet to come
Snowstorm starts and it's hard to see
The sun plays peekaboo
Just beyond the big oak tree
Disappearing, never fully in view
I imagine the warmth on my skin
I almost feel my heart defrost
I just want to feel alive again
And get back all that was lost
I'm just a girl chasing sun
Just wanting to feel something real
My past I've tried to outrun
To cover up and failing to conceal
But I know I'll make it there
I'll bask in the sun and all it's glory
Stripping naked I'll lay bare
All my scars that tell of my story
Published 22nd Dec 2015
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22nd Dec 2015 6:06pm
We are all chasing warmth but so often the coldness that chills our bones the most comes from those we love the most. We are never wetter than when it is raining in our hearts... jj
22nd Dec 2015 6:26pm
Lol well I think I'll take a vacation from the bone chilling love where I'm nice and dry. Lol Thanks for the comment
22nd Dec 2015 8:05pm
You're welcome. I almost missed this reply in the regular comment box but I came back to read it again and saw it.
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22nd Dec 2015 10:50pm
Red, really dig this one.. i love your different styles.. and every poem is heartfelt.. great qualities to have as a writer.. this brilliant write, is just spot on.. when it comes to how life can wear you down.. especially our pasts.. very nicely done.. you've got a lot of talent.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
22nd Dec 2015 11:03pm
Thanks dave. I try to do different things switch it up. Try to go out of my comfort zone a little. I'm glad it's appreciated (:
23rd Dec 2015 1:50pm
a poem for sun seekers everywhere. It is clearly obvious why some peoples worship the sun - I do too and living in Scotland i don't see it too often - I do have to arrange to go somewhere hot and sunny at least once a year to top up my sunny disposition :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
23rd Dec 2015 5:02pm
Hello Dave from Scotland(: Yeah it's been a rainy season here in Cali much needed but appreciative when the sun makes an appearance all the more. Thank your for taking the time to read my poetry I'm glad you liked it (:
2nd Jan 2016 9:43am
Aawww yea RAIN gives me the blues, n I'm always wantin' the sun
though I realize the necessity of it
Me n rain don't get along lol... Excellent piece Red :)
though I realize the necessity of it
Me n rain don't get along lol... Excellent piece Red :)
2nd Jan 2016 5:18pm
Me n rain have a love hate thing I love to be out of it but hate being in it. But yeah I love the sun even if it makes me darker during the summer lol
