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Lucifer's Whispers
my mind turns towards Hades
whispers on the wind
inner turmoil and rage
stirrings of my lover Lucifer
it's been awhile since
I've heard His voice fully
my demons are quiet
no secrets to be kept
sulfurous tears ring my hollow eyes
still wearing my spiked halo
piercing my brain a lobotomized whore
marking me as one of the devil's own
the portal to the netherworld
closed to me for now
calling to the North, South, East and West
where art thou Lord Lucifer?
I await your presence
screaming at the confines
of my mundane existence
the walls closing in on me
the sound of my own voice
makes me want to vomit
I see it shouting at me
from the crimson pages
in need of your flame
to char my flesh
feed me pain, torture
fuck me with your forked cock
that rips me in two
pops the cherry of my soul
as it enters raw and rough
with a heroin rush
feed me from your black table
as I sit at the foot of your throne
your good little pussy
always open and adored
Published 7th Dec 2015
| Edited 5th May 2016
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7th Dec 2015 11:45pm
need want touch addiction....need want touch addiction...need....forever on it goes...till a single black rose floats on the river Styx...nice writing!!
9th Dec 2015 3:53pm
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9th Dec 2015 3:54pm
thank you beautiful one for showing me so much love on this write..
I love you lovely lady :)
xoxo Brenda
I love you lovely lady :)
xoxo Brenda
7th Dec 2015 11:51pm
9th Dec 2015 3:55pm
8th Dec 2015 2:53am
My dearest Lady Crim, you writing never ceases to amaze me. It like a trip down The River Styx where the dead wail laments of forgotten times ringed with honor and tragedy.
9th Dec 2015 3:56pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades it is my memories of Him and days I miss..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
8th Dec 2015 7:49am
tiny gods, clearly i've got to start communing with the underworld ;)
beautiful brenda,this is steeped in wickedness & much adored ...
"fuck me with your forked cock
that rips me in two
pops the cherry of my soul
as it enters raw and rough
with a heroin rush
feed me from your black table
as I sit at the foot of your throne"
^^^^^
love that you didn't pull punches there!
... darkly beautiful
xoxox
beautiful brenda,this is steeped in wickedness & much adored ...
"fuck me with your forked cock
that rips me in two
pops the cherry of my soul
as it enters raw and rough
with a heroin rush
feed me from your black table
as I sit at the foot of your throne"
^^^^^
love that you didn't pull punches there!
... darkly beautiful
xoxox
9th Dec 2015 3:57pm
thank you most graciously beautiful Katja for the love one this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
8th Dec 2015 8:46am
you're a womam of poetry who resides ever in darkness, Crim,
maybe where love is truest.
there lurks enchantment in those regions...
maybe where love is truest.
there lurks enchantment in those regions...
9th Dec 2015 3:58pm
8th Dec 2015 8:23pm
A very dark and sureal picture of the mind, this piece left me wondering about the inner struggles we all have with these entities and our tenacity to defy and embrace at the same time. Nice write.
9th Dec 2015 3:59pm
8th Dec 2015 8:42pm
You turn up the heat in the inferno, Crim, making even Lucifer squirm. You might just end up as his Queen with work like this, and those whispers will become screams. You'll toy with him for eternity....
9th Dec 2015 3:59pm
Anonymous
8th Dec 2015 9:52pm
Brenda, such a dark, and brilliant masterpiece.. inked in Crimsin, and sinful glory.. i loved every line.. this was brilliantly, and beautifully written.. with love..
Dave
Dave
9th Dec 2015 4:02pm
9th Dec 2015 3:06am
"piercing my brain a lobotomized whore"
This picture in my mind is dark and wonderful.
This picture in my mind is dark and wonderful.
9th Dec 2015 4:03pm
9th Dec 2015 9:20am
9th Dec 2015 4:04pm
9th Dec 2015 9:51am
I think if Lucifer were replying to you
he say something lil this: " Feed me that sweet n willin wet pussy my obedient n submissive lil whore, I've
a ravenous yearning for pink meat!"
At least that's what I think lol...
Seriously, outstanding 'dark matter' :)
he say something lil this: " Feed me that sweet n willin wet pussy my obedient n submissive lil whore, I've
a ravenous yearning for pink meat!"
At least that's what I think lol...
Seriously, outstanding 'dark matter' :)
9th Dec 2015 4:05pm
9th Dec 2015 7:27pm
excellent dark sexy poetry - It is strange, I am developing a real love and fascination for your poetry and maybe because its a poetry that I just can't write and I have tried - these poems are so well crafted, you are a genuine artist :-)
25th Apr 2016 3:51pm
9th Dec 2015 9:33pm
This is Dark, Crim.. Sounds more like a BDSM with Lucifer because of all the pain and anguish going on. :)
25th Apr 2016 3:52pm
Anonymous
12th Dec 2015 2:03am
Wowzers Crim......haunting pic is great......your words as always rattle the soul deep within......fantastic write!!! Xo :)
25th Apr 2016 3:53pm
12th Dec 2015 4:41am
His lips kiss fire betwixt your lines... a visionary artist, My Sweet Sin... I'm licking the desperation from your expectant plea! Cherishing your ink, blue angel xx
25th Apr 2016 3:54pm
26th Jan 2016 11:12pm
crim with the black and red, constant as the pendulum! hehe been too long lol
25th Apr 2016 3:54pm
