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Dove
To touch your words would be pure grace of beauty
On my fingertips
And i would trace the lines of your lips around mine
Reminding me a thousand times
And a thousand times after that
That we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry
A true gift of natural shine
You make my thoughts deeper
Better
Wider than the ocean apart from you
Oh M
My dove
Please, i beg dip your pen
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story
And i dip mine in you and ink
You out of me in amazing glory
On my fingertips
And i would trace the lines of your lips around mine
Reminding me a thousand times
And a thousand times after that
That we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry
A true gift of natural shine
You make my thoughts deeper
Better
Wider than the ocean apart from you
Oh M
My dove
Please, i beg dip your pen
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story
And i dip mine in you and ink
You out of me in amazing glory
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Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 6:20am
" i beg dip your pen
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story
And i dip mine in you and ink
You out of me in amazing glory"
Love these romantic lines. :-)
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story
And i dip mine in you and ink
You out of me in amazing glory"
Love these romantic lines. :-)
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 8:42am
Was written in honor of my doves..my most special term of enderment for a gal..you Jade and Marketa specifically..
Love you princess dove!
Jen
Love you princess dove!
Jen
Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 9:21am
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6th Dec 2015 3:23pm
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 10:09am
What a powerful, passionate woman you are Jen A truly amazing. moving work.
Big Hugz to ya!
Big Hugz to ya!
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 3:25pm
Thanks Kitty Kat! Just saw your note..will be reading soon..you always gimme a goose and a giggle.
Love n hugs back
Jen
Love n hugs back
Jen
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 1:16pm
Jen, the opening verses "To touch your words would be pure grace of beauty / On my fingertips" The physicality of the words being touched stands out immediately. "Sapphires of poetry" ; "Ocean apart"; "cherry red blood of my heart". ...All excellent concrete images Romance and intimacy with a feathers touch. Very nice
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 3:27pm
Why thank you my sweet delicious squaaat thruuustin Ed head. Lol
Such a dear new friend!
And exellent poet.
Much love
Jennifer
Such a dear new friend!
And exellent poet.
Much love
Jennifer
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 1:23pm
Full of a sweet n passionate spilling from the heart... Very nicely expressed :)
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 3:28pm
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 2:15pm
damn [&] blast miss jen this was beautiful...
“That we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry“
&
"dip your pen
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story"
^^^^^^^^
that finish ugh omg glorious, darlin' simply glorious
xoxox
“That we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry“
&
"dip your pen
In the cherry red blood
Of my heart
And write my story"
^^^^^^^^
that finish ugh omg glorious, darlin' simply glorious
xoxox
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 3:31pm
Thank you sweet sexy Zhang! You to naughty naughty to be a dove...
A wild kitty Kat! Meeeoow!
And luuuuv it! Dig the fuck outta you!
Always squeezes..
Cant take my eyes off that go jess face!
Adore that pic and so perfect!
J
A wild kitty Kat! Meeeoow!
And luuuuv it! Dig the fuck outta you!
Always squeezes..
Cant take my eyes off that go jess face!
Adore that pic and so perfect!
J
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 3:37pm
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6th Dec 2015 6:43pm
Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 4:18pm
This is a wonderful tribute to the femme writers of DUP. You're one of the best of the bunch. All these doves and one delighted crow....
"we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry
A true gift of natural shine"
Sapphires and a few diamonds for good measure. Excellent work Jen!
"we speak the same knowing femme language
That the whole of you resides in me as woman
That we are sapphires of poetry
A true gift of natural shine"
Sapphires and a few diamonds for good measure. Excellent work Jen!
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 6:44pm
Re. Dove
Anonymous
6th Dec 2015 7:44pm
Eh . . . You pen deep with this one,
Jeniffer, and sweetness abides
within each and every line, loved
it, there are some remarkable within . . .
Jeniffer, and sweetness abides
within each and every line, loved
it, there are some remarkable within . . .
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Re: Re. Dove
6th Dec 2015 7:53pm
Thanks Jerry! Lol
Love the structure in your comment!
Adore you..
Love
Jen
Love the structure in your comment!
Adore you..
Love
Jen
Re: Re. Dove
8th Dec 2015 00:59am
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2015 5:04am
Hey Jen.....I read this amazing piece off line and had to come visit......this made me feel so much emotion......it touched me as if you peered into my soul and wrote what I felt.....beautiful tribute.....RL for me.....luv and hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Dove
8th Dec 2015 5:19am
Ah! And what a gorgeous comment.
Thank u, and so honored by your spot!
My goodness! 🐷Happy as a pig in mud🐽lol
You are a dove as well sweet!
Much love
J🌹
Thank u, and so honored by your spot!
My goodness! 🐷Happy as a pig in mud🐽lol
You are a dove as well sweet!
Much love
J🌹
Re. Dove
8th Dec 2015 9:57pm
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12th Dec 2015 10:46pm
Re. Dove
9th Dec 2015 7:48pm
wow Jenn, this was beauty "a thousand times, and thousand times more after that", very impressive...
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Re: Re. Dove
12th Dec 2015 10:47pm
Re. Dove
12th Dec 2015 10:20pm
This is the most passionately scribed love poem I've yet had the pleasure to read. Your lyrical pen works magic on me. Your doves are very fortunate to have a friend as tenderly loving as you. Your poem is spellbinding. ;-)
Love ya through the years,
John
Love ya through the years,
John
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Re: Re. Dove
12th Dec 2015 10:49pm
Oh my sweet sweet pet..thank you!
You make me feel.so good honey.
Love you throughout as well
Jennifer
You make me feel.so good honey.
Love you throughout as well
Jennifer