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Elliptical
“Time throws you out of its dimensionless planar
like a boomerang. It unites with you again in death.”
~ Vishwanath S J
I am content with
what this moment holds
and what it doesn’t.
But, sometimes I feel
the flip of your wrist
retract landing gear.
Prefrontal cortex pilot
sailing airfoil wings
toward the tarmac
of our birth.
How fortunate are we;
boomerangs return.
~
like a boomerang. It unites with you again in death.”
~ Vishwanath S J
I am content with
what this moment holds
and what it doesn’t.
But, sometimes I feel
the flip of your wrist
retract landing gear.
Prefrontal cortex pilot
sailing airfoil wings
toward the tarmac
of our birth.
How fortunate are we;
boomerangs return.
~
Published 4th Dec 2015
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4th Dec 2015 8:43pm
4th Dec 2015 9:54pm
BOOM!
How fortunate we are you rang...Ahavati - I love the way the world is held in the palm of your words
How fortunate we are you rang...Ahavati - I love the way the world is held in the palm of your words
4th Dec 2015 11:40pm
I used to tell myself
that I lived for the moment,
but then there were times
when I lived despite it...
that I lived for the moment,
but then there were times
when I lived despite it...
5th Dec 2015 4:15am
Sweet gods this is soo
hitting my heart, no words
for the beauty of this..
cannot find any..
I am spiritually churned and
charged just from reading.
-Howlings
hitting my heart, no words
for the beauty of this..
cannot find any..
I am spiritually churned and
charged just from reading.
-Howlings
5th Dec 2015 11:35am
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10th Dec 2015 8:19pm
Ahhh, Ahavati, luv ~ :-*
How I have missed you and the way you evoke thought!
I am finding this metaphor of boomerang exquisitely fascinating, luv, especially when I consider another crucial facet of boomerangs. And, I wonder, as I ponder this, whether you had any of this in mind when you wrote this or if I'm headed off into the aether on this one. :-p
So, though boomerangs return oft-times, when they connect to that which they have sought or been sent seeking, they remain, ne c'est pas? I am riveted to the idea that, mayhap, there is a correlation here. That once connected to the Source (is there one? Mayhap, one philosophical conundrum at a time, eh? ;-p), mayhap not a return, or a return in a wholly different way: no longer matter, perhaps pure energy, light, love...
Hmmm... I'm off on a tangent again, but you see what reading your works invariably does for me, luv. I will be cogitating all the remainder of the day.
Merci beaucoup, ma chérie, mille fois... :-*
How I have missed you and the way you evoke thought!
I am finding this metaphor of boomerang exquisitely fascinating, luv, especially when I consider another crucial facet of boomerangs. And, I wonder, as I ponder this, whether you had any of this in mind when you wrote this or if I'm headed off into the aether on this one. :-p
So, though boomerangs return oft-times, when they connect to that which they have sought or been sent seeking, they remain, ne c'est pas? I am riveted to the idea that, mayhap, there is a correlation here. That once connected to the Source (is there one? Mayhap, one philosophical conundrum at a time, eh? ;-p), mayhap not a return, or a return in a wholly different way: no longer matter, perhaps pure energy, light, love...
Hmmm... I'm off on a tangent again, but you see what reading your works invariably does for me, luv. I will be cogitating all the remainder of the day.
Merci beaucoup, ma chérie, mille fois... :-*
29th Dec 2015 00:16am
The boomerang that finds it's target has no need to return and, if it doesn't, becomes a boomerang reincarnate?
Anonymous
18th Dec 2015 4:43pm
no words yet..just letting this one soak
much respect!!
much respect!!
28th Dec 2015 9:56pm
Moments, happy and sad, help us become fully aware
of the reason we are here.
Wonderful strength is so little words!!!
Enjoyed...
of the reason we are here.
Wonderful strength is so little words!!!
Enjoyed...
Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 6:56am
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10th Jan 2016 6:04pm
Jeezez take the wheel, you are so clever Ahavati I truly loved this view as we both know I am so connected with
the universe..... Stunning Malady
Loves you Sis
Jackie xoxoxo
the universe..... Stunning Malady
Loves you Sis
Jackie xoxoxo
10th Jan 2016 11:10pm
