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Becumming Hours
He seeped in
Gently crept
Like my sands fall
With tip toe touch
With tickle speak
My thoughts wound around
Him tick tock
Hard becum the hands of my watch
Cum the hands on my hips
Cum the taste on my red lip
Had been acquired
Now desired
With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées
For my longing eyes
For his hands of time
To pause a while
Between my white thighs
And enter me please
Between my weak in the knee
Knowing deeeep
In virgin whore arch
In hard soul seek
Full starving stroke
Becum beats in gooood measure
Until much knowing
My touch
In 24 pleasure
Is as fond familiar
As his reflection
In my glass
Gently crept
Like my sands fall
With tip toe touch
With tickle speak
My thoughts wound around
Him tick tock
Hard becum the hands of my watch
Cum the hands on my hips
Cum the taste on my red lip
Had been acquired
Now desired
With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées
For my longing eyes
For his hands of time
To pause a while
Between my white thighs
And enter me please
Between my weak in the knee
Knowing deeeep
In virgin whore arch
In hard soul seek
Full starving stroke
Becum beats in gooood measure
Until much knowing
My touch
In 24 pleasure
Is as fond familiar
As his reflection
In my glass
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Re. Becumming Hours
3rd Dec 2015 5:11pm
I love the word Phera(moan) Jen. Very inventive. Another hot piece by a sensual woman. Very nice.
John
John
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3rd Dec 2015 5:16pm
Re. Becumming Hours
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2015 5:43pm
Jen,
Love how you rock this one around the c(l)ock. ;-) It refects well upon your weakness....
tornado
Love how you rock this one around the c(l)ock. ;-) It refects well upon your weakness....
tornado
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Re: Re. Becumming Hours
What weakness!!?? I have none!!!
Hehehehe...jk..thank you nado darlin..
Got mih all a twirl withya whirl...
Ooolahweee giv summa dT too me!
Idk...lyrical miss has my head in rhyme tyme fun...
Much nado luvun
J
Hehehehe...jk..thank you nado darlin..
Got mih all a twirl withya whirl...
Ooolahweee giv summa dT too me!
Idk...lyrical miss has my head in rhyme tyme fun...
Much nado luvun
J
Re. Becumming Hours
3rd Dec 2015 6:37pm
Conduct most becumming! I loved this Jen. It has precision and elegance:
"Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées
For my longing eyes
For his hands of time
To pause a while
Between my white thighs
And enter me please"
And so polite! You're satisfaction's guaranteed.....
"Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées
For my longing eyes
For his hands of time
To pause a while
Between my white thighs
And enter me please"
And so polite! You're satisfaction's guaranteed.....
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4th Dec 2015 4:59am
Re. Becumming Hours
3rd Dec 2015 7:00pm
oh ginnykins, this is a sensual feast. your wordplay is gorgeous making it a treat to read aloud [lurvs the trippy-t sounds] ...
"Now desired
With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées"
... phera(moan) ffs jenni-lady, i wanna turn back the clock & think of that one first ltm
loveeeed this muchly
xo
"Now desired
With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné
His funny affectées"
... phera(moan) ffs jenni-lady, i wanna turn back the clock & think of that one first ltm
loveeeed this muchly
xo
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Re: Re. Becumming Hours
4th Dec 2015 4:55am
You an your grabby phrase c(l)ock..
Lol i read you..and know id have neva thoughta it anyway# lol.
Love ya sugar booger
Jen
Lol i read you..and know id have neva thoughta it anyway# lol.
Love ya sugar booger
Jen
Re. Becumming Hours
3rd Dec 2015 7:20pm
Yup you've done it agin buggerlugz, I'm off to the muff muncher's ball now to join the clit lickers' coalition :-)
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4th Dec 2015 5:00am
Re. Becumming Hours
4th Dec 2015 3:27am
The picture alone speaks volumes...sexy hands of time...that seem to tick to your every beat...loving the warm passion of this piece
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Re: Re. Becumming Hours
4th Dec 2015 4:53am
🚬💋well..you know...
Honey..you are a force that i feel is gonna be reckoned with..lyrical has skills!!
Thanks for the trill on my spill.
You have me stuck in glorious rhyme!
What a good fucking time...
L ol seriously...loved your piece sweetheart!
And thanks so much!
Honey..you are a force that i feel is gonna be reckoned with..lyrical has skills!!
Thanks for the trill on my spill.
You have me stuck in glorious rhyme!
What a good fucking time...
L ol seriously...loved your piece sweetheart!
And thanks so much!
Re. Becumming Hours
4th Dec 2015 10:38pm
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6th Dec 2015 4:52am
Re. Becumming Hours
6th Dec 2015 4:18am
Love this phrase:
"With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné "
reallu enjoyed the sound reinforcement through the poem, but the "Phera(moan)" phrase was awesome
"With Pavlovian proportion
Becum Instinctual need
Dials turn churning me
Systematic seduction induced
Phera(moan) glow produced
His beautiful attentionné "
reallu enjoyed the sound reinforcement through the poem, but the "Phera(moan)" phrase was awesome
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Re: Re. Becumming Hours
6th Dec 2015 4:43am
Thanks sweetheart! You sexy thang you! Liked those words mihself. Thanks Hancuffs..for your comments..and help in the comp!
Love
J
Love
J