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Verbal Fuck
The manner you compose those sexy verbs
has me fantasizing about you
wondering if my succulent thickness
seduces your thoughts as good as
your words intellectually fucks me
Lyrically licks me
I love the way you absorb my lines
while reading between my thighs
tasting my wet content.
Sensual stanzas making me weak
to the point I’d rather read you at 12am
instead of sleep
Dated poetry dripping in ‘chocolate mocha’
strong enough that I can hear your voice
and attentively, I listen
until moans from the page turn into
1am submissions
Your strategized strokes have me confessing…
how sinfully-good your pen feels against my skin
you’re drenching me with expressions conducive to
a cybernetic high
and you’re the poetic reason why,
my enthralled slit…..poetically seeps
Rain~
(....inspiration via comment)
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 10th Nov 2015
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re. Verbal Fuck
.......wow, the power of sensulectual words. Nothing more to be said
brilliant pen :-)
brilliant pen :-)
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10th Nov 2015 3:29am
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10th Nov 2015 3:37am
Lady T, isn't it weird how a few words can cause such grand inspiration?
Thank you my gorgeous friend for your generous support and listing.
ps. I adore you for always checking me too, so thankful for you...xo
Thank you my gorgeous friend for your generous support and listing.
ps. I adore you for always checking me too, so thankful for you...xo
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 3:21am
Your strategized strokes have me confessing…
how sinfully-good your pen feels against my skin
you’re drenching me with expressions conducive to
a cybernetic high
and you’re the poetic reason why,
my enthralled slit…..poetically seeps
Rain~
--- OMG! All that lusciousness from a single comment.. swooned by this erotically hot intellect! Dripping ink like fervent Rain is your specialty! In adoration, blue angel
how sinfully-good your pen feels against my skin
you’re drenching me with expressions conducive to
a cybernetic high
and you’re the poetic reason why,
my enthralled slit…..poetically seeps
Rain~
--- OMG! All that lusciousness from a single comment.. swooned by this erotically hot intellect! Dripping ink like fervent Rain is your specialty! In adoration, blue angel
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10th Nov 2015 3:42am
Lol... blue-angel, I feel great anytime I receive such excitement from a poetess like yourself!
Glad you enjoy sexy! Thanks doll and appreciate you keeping her...
Glad you enjoy sexy! Thanks doll and appreciate you keeping her...
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10th Nov 2015 4:43am
beautifully written rain... you have a amazing talent with the pen... keep expressing that fire :)
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10th Nov 2015 8:13pm
What a wonderful surprise! I love when a new vibe grace my page. Appreciate you stopping by, MagicV! I'll be sure to return some poetic love... Thank you! :)
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 6:57am
"How sinfully good your pen feels against my skin"... Your ode is a poem I would write across every inch of your skin... Oh how I love the taste of your sweet verse as it poetically seeps into my mind... I hear the smoothness of your voice orally pleasing the beating drums that give sound to the music in my heart...
JJ
JJ
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....see, it's comments like this one that heats my pen up, causing her to make love to paper.
Your words always leave me smiling and wanting more. Thank you JJ....
and I appreciate the listing...
Your words always leave me smiling and wanting more. Thank you JJ....
and I appreciate the listing...
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 10:12am
"I love the way you absorb my lines
while reading between my thighs
tasting my wet content."
^^^^^^
rainy lady, i've got me a mild case of penis envy over here
*gigglesnorts*
this was an absolute feast for the sense!!!! no one serves up erotica the way you do
loveeeeee love loved!
xoxox
while reading between my thighs
tasting my wet content."
^^^^^^
rainy lady, i've got me a mild case of penis envy over here
*gigglesnorts*
this was an absolute feast for the sense!!!! no one serves up erotica the way you do
loveeeeee love loved!
xoxox
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10th Nov 2015 8:22pm
*chuckles*... penis evil, really?! :) You are a mess and then some....
Thank you my gentle dancedoll! Love hearing from you..... Xo
Thank you my gentle dancedoll! Love hearing from you..... Xo
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 10:26am
Mmmmmm... N to think, "she used to be MY girl...she has a charmed 'versatility' but it's alright with me..." BUT if I had the chance, I'd
lay her back, as a matter of fact
ride her sway..." Lol yea well it's a strong simlia-rarity to that classic, but hopefully you get it Miss! lol
Love love Looovvveeed this piece of heated Rain!! :)
lay her back, as a matter of fact
ride her sway..." Lol yea well it's a strong simlia-rarity to that classic, but hopefully you get it Miss! lol
Love love Looovvveeed this piece of heated Rain!! :)
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10th Nov 2015 8:30pm
lol.... yeah, I get it! I got it good too! :)
You are a hoot Rich! Always the one with such animated and colorful comments. I love them too...
Thank you luv!
You are a hoot Rich! Always the one with such animated and colorful comments. I love them too...
Thank you luv!
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2015 3:23pm
I occasionally feel this way regarding comments I receive from time to time...and in return I try to stay loyal but I find myself slowly slipping away...such a travesty that his comments rarely notice...*sigh*, Miss Rain...as this little piece of poetic trinket is much to be cherished...thank you...xo, Devlin.
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It's always an extra treat when you poke your head this way and take a piece of me for keeps via RL. :)
You are such an amazing poet, and I'm honored to be in your poetic cycle....
You are such an amazing poet, and I'm honored to be in your poetic cycle....
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 3:37pm
"Your strategized strokes have me confessing…
how sinfully-good your pen feels against my skin
you’re drenching me with expressions conducive to
a cybernetic high
and you’re the poetic reason why,
my enthralled slit…..poetically seeps "
~I always love a great ending....lol
I've missed your ink so much and it's feels so good to taste it again. You are smoking hot mamacita ; )
how sinfully-good your pen feels against my skin
you’re drenching me with expressions conducive to
a cybernetic high
and you’re the poetic reason why,
my enthralled slit…..poetically seeps "
~I always love a great ending....lol
I've missed your ink so much and it's feels so good to taste it again. You are smoking hot mamacita ; )
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10th Nov 2015 8:35pm
:) I think everyone is enjoying that stanza. I've missed you more than you've missed me, bet on it! :)
So happy to be back connected to ya Lena! Thank you beautiful, and appreciate you keeping her for your virtual bookshelf....
So happy to be back connected to ya Lena! Thank you beautiful, and appreciate you keeping her for your virtual bookshelf....
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 4:44pm
Rain, luv ~ :-*
This is quite, quite, quite incendiary, I DO so love poetry that's highly erotic while being about a topic that isn't, on the face of it, necessarily such an erotic thing. (Though, I must confess, I find words rather intoxicatingly erotic all by themselves, ne c'est pas? ;-*)
You, luv, have created somewhat here that is extraordinary, fine, lovely, and altogether redolent of sensuality, rather like the boudoir of an odalisque, I imagine: full of honeyed scents, rich spices, exotic tapestries and rugs, a cocooned haven of decadent splendor. Ahhh yes, that's rather like you. Delicious... ;-*
This is quite, quite, quite incendiary, I DO so love poetry that's highly erotic while being about a topic that isn't, on the face of it, necessarily such an erotic thing. (Though, I must confess, I find words rather intoxicatingly erotic all by themselves, ne c'est pas? ;-*)
You, luv, have created somewhat here that is extraordinary, fine, lovely, and altogether redolent of sensuality, rather like the boudoir of an odalisque, I imagine: full of honeyed scents, rich spices, exotic tapestries and rugs, a cocooned haven of decadent splendor. Ahhh yes, that's rather like you. Delicious... ;-*
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10th Nov 2015 8:44pm
...see, this could be a poem in it's infancy. Freakin' love the beauty of this reply Savaja.
Ooh weee.... I think I may use a bolder font and write a little sumthin' sumethin' female licking.... (..if you know what I mean) :) Thank you beautiful, for the wonderful comment and for tucking my girl away in your cyber library.....
Ooh weee.... I think I may use a bolder font and write a little sumthin' sumethin' female licking.... (..if you know what I mean) :) Thank you beautiful, for the wonderful comment and for tucking my girl away in your cyber library.....
Re. Verbal Fuck
sometimes that's all it takes..just a few words from someone that permeate beneath the artistry....a subtle push to make a cadre of metaphors gush from the quill...to be poetically appreciated AND soulfully recognized is a beautiful thing indeed..that is what we're doing here yes?dressing up the nuances of the soul?...as always your ink resonates Ms Rain..much respect
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10th Nov 2015 8:46pm
Damn! Another great response made by an amazing poet!
"sometimes that's all it takes..just a few words from someone that permeate beneath the artistry....a subtle push to make a cadre of metaphors gush from the quill..."<--- that right thurr, I loved! Thank you Naajir for the support. appreciate ya....
"sometimes that's all it takes..just a few words from someone that permeate beneath the artistry....a subtle push to make a cadre of metaphors gush from the quill..."<--- that right thurr, I loved! Thank you Naajir for the support. appreciate ya....
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 6:16pm
lovely Rain someone is evoking quite the feelings of passion in you..
love this delectable flowing from you delicious pen ; )
love Brenda
love this delectable flowing from you delicious pen ; )
love Brenda
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10th Nov 2015 8:56pm
Crim, you are too kind. Yes, someone did and I kinda' liked it! lollol
Thank you sexy one.....
Thank you sexy one.....
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 7:44pm
It's so difficult to not get swept away in DUP's erotic content. It might be beautiful, over-heated, funny or ridiculous but it's almost always a turn on one way or another. This one's pure aphrodisiac. Gorgeous work Rain!
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10th Nov 2015 8:59pm
So true, it seems to be about 65% erotica on DU. I try not to overload my readers with it, because I hate to be burned out with it myself. Happy to see you visiting me crowfly. I do love and appreciate the ink respect... Thank you!
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 9:26pm
That's why we've got language ... for dressing the sexual fields and watch the seeds coming up. Very erotic write, Rain ... Love it a lot!
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10th Nov 2015 11:06pm
Chi, so happy you dropped by with such sweet pen love for me. I thankya kindly beautiful lady.....Xo
Re. Verbal Fuck
10th Nov 2015 11:17pm
Sensual, seductive and sublime. Like being poetically seduced by a young lover. You messed with my mind with this beautiful work Rain.
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11th Nov 2015 00:12am
....that's what I'm suppose to do, my funnyman. Mess with your mind!
.....ain't it grand?! ;) I love your ink devotion Tony! Thanks hun, I appreciate you keeping her!
.....ain't it grand?! ;) I love your ink devotion Tony! Thanks hun, I appreciate you keeping her!
Re. Verbal Fuck
11th Nov 2015 3:49am
The penetration that marks
Against this parched page
Leaves it's bulging marks
Onto hidden layers
Confessing it's rage
Verbally fucked, in so many ways. Who doesn't love the Rain when her warm drops seeps deep into our brains.
Against this parched page
Leaves it's bulging marks
Onto hidden layers
Confessing it's rage
Verbally fucked, in so many ways. Who doesn't love the Rain when her warm drops seeps deep into our brains.
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11th Nov 2015 4:28pm
:) .....as always, your words are design to stir me. Thanks G for the wonderful comment, and for placing her on your keepsake list....
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12th Nov 2015 10:20pm
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13th Nov 2015 1:56am
Re. Verbal Fuck
30th Jan 2016 4:17am
Words are my most powerful aphrodisiac. The brain is the most important sex organ. Your poem sizzles with the allure of well placed words and the sexual reaction they inspire. Love your poem immensely.
John
John
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30th Jan 2016 7:52am
John, your commentary is so soothing to my pen's skin! Really making her feel good with your kind words. She thanks you.... :)