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Cruelly
swimming in troubled waters
I can't seem to get the timber
of your seductive voice out of my mind
my heart has grown cold with callouses
still I find myself dipping in brown pools
your verse mesmerizing
so delicate
the way it wraps it's self around a woman
making her believe that squeeze
is for her and her alone
cruelly my heart has gone numb
in your absence
all it takes is seeing you and visions
of your body
flash into my mind
how I would like to ride you
until the wee hours of the morning
until sweat pours from you and I
intermingling flavors
which I would lick from your masculine form
I am beguiled
there is no hope for me
I feel nothing until you enter with force
causing my heart to pound
my pussy's heartbeat comes to life
primal desire from your scent still lingering
I can taste you so far and yet so close
the goodbye
will never stand true
I will carry your verses marked on my soul
searing in my own wetness
fuck it I love who you are
though not mine to possess
licking your mind left to obsess
Cruelly
Published 28th Oct 2015
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28th Oct 2015 00:17am
28th Oct 2015 7:36pm
Anonymous
28th Oct 2015 00:22am
Brenda, this is simply brilliant.. heartfelt, and conflicting desires weighing heavy on the soul.. truly perfection, you're an incredible poetess.. i so enjoy your work, and am left swimming in your words.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
28th Oct 2015 7:37pm
thank you graciously Dave you always touch my heart with the love you show me and my ink :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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28th Oct 2015 7:40pm
beautiful one thank you dearly for the continued love you've shown me :)
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
28th Oct 2015 1:04am
Brenda, beautifully written poem in both style and form. The emotions of this write are beautifully conveyed.
I can feel the want and sense of loss. The yearning for once was and is no longer. Very vivid imagery throughout. Masterfully done in a way that is unique to you lovely, Brenda. Those of us who truly have loved and loss never forget and often reminsce.
Adoringly
Yours
Keith
I can feel the want and sense of loss. The yearning for once was and is no longer. Very vivid imagery throughout. Masterfully done in a way that is unique to you lovely, Brenda. Those of us who truly have loved and loss never forget and often reminsce.
Adoringly
Yours
Keith
28th Oct 2015 7:41pm
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28th Oct 2015 5:14am
Powerful and so heartfelt...
understanding every word you breath here beautiful Crimsin....
((((((((((((((((((((Brenda))))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you sis
Jackie xoxox
What a Punch!
the goodbye <-----
will never stand true
I will carry your verse marked on my soul
searing in my own wetness
fuck it I love who you are
though not mine to possess
licking your mind left to obsess
----> Cruelly
understanding every word you breath here beautiful Crimsin....
((((((((((((((((((((Brenda))))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you sis
Jackie xoxox
What a Punch!
the goodbye <-----
will never stand true
I will carry your verse marked on my soul
searing in my own wetness
fuck it I love who you are
though not mine to possess
licking your mind left to obsess
----> Cruelly
28th Oct 2015 7:43pm
thank you Jackie for such a great embracing response :)
love you lady..
xoxo Brenda
love you lady..
xoxo Brenda
Anonymous
28th Oct 2015 5:56am
You write brilliantly dear....heartfelt heartrending and touching inside others.
28th Oct 2015 7:44pm
28th Oct 2015 6:12pm
unholee sighs, I've missed you ladyluv!
the honest Fuck you, I love you, Fuck you.. is deeply felt in your pour..
"so delicate
the way it wraps it's self around a woman
making her believe that squeeze
is for her and her alone"
~absolute fav as you capture It perfectly.. the tingled mesmorize..
always touching my heart with your words Brenda.. loves this!
~d
the honest Fuck you, I love you, Fuck you.. is deeply felt in your pour..
"so delicate
the way it wraps it's self around a woman
making her believe that squeeze
is for her and her alone"
~absolute fav as you capture It perfectly.. the tingled mesmorize..
always touching my heart with your words Brenda.. loves this!
~d
28th Oct 2015 7:46pm
thank you lovely d~ I've so missed you as well beautiful.. you're presence is most cherished and appreciated :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
28th Oct 2015 7:13pm
"until sweat poured from you and I / intermingling flavors / which I would lick from your masculine form" scintillating! your strong feelings soak the page, thumbs up to the scrumptious Crim...
28th Oct 2015 7:47pm
28th Oct 2015 8:06pm
Astounding and outstanding - the best of yours I have ever read
such an easy add :-)
such an easy add :-)
29th Oct 2015 1:53pm
29th Oct 2015 00:08am
29th Oct 2015 1:54pm
aw thank you beautiful you really touched my heart with your comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
29th Oct 2015 00:45am
fuck it I love who you are
though not mine to possess
licking your mind left to obsess
Cruelly" .... - passionate musing, your voice comes through so sensual and mesmerizingly calm. Love the formatting too;<3! - blue angel
though not mine to possess
licking your mind left to obsess
Cruelly" .... - passionate musing, your voice comes through so sensual and mesmerizingly calm. Love the formatting too;<3! - blue angel
29th Oct 2015 1:55pm
29th Oct 2015 8:20am
Omg omg omfg!! Yea, that's what one calls a magnificent piece of art!!
Wow Crim, u did it again! :)
Wow Crim, u did it again! :)
29th Oct 2015 1:56pm
thank you most graciously Poe gave me big smiles with your response :)
love Crim
love Crim
