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Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMbIa7sAJAw
Evanescence "Lose Control".. please listen while reading, ty!
I'll put a spell on you...
I'm not afraid,
I have a bathroom towel for a cape
a straw broom and a peppermint candy stick
for a wand.
an Enchantment charm,
really any spell will do
I wanna make you mine
my erotic JuJu.....
Secrets and hush tones
a laureate minx
soft pink words,
written in light blue ink.
Cornerstone remedies
secret rendezvous,
my witches brew
I breathe into you....
Needing to taste your tongue
I offer mine with no choice
close and aware,
burning shades on my skin
with your eye-fucking stare.
whispers between us felt in liquid heat shared..
Smoldering to inhale
your ecstasy,
blowing grape hearts and smoke rings..
I wanna wear you in dark tangle..
deep and mutually.
Written with my sis Zazzles aka Broom
10/23/15
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/219458-sarah-good-darksighs-and-broom/
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
26th Oct 2015 4:27pm
Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
26th Oct 2015 5:26pm
Yes my darkness! it was a breeze combining our thoughts together...
what I like most is you can't tell where i write and where u write.
I mean it seems to me it just blends as one in unison!@
loves you Tanya! Thanks for the Halloween fun this year!
hope to write more with you soon!
Mwah!
loves you sisxoxoxoxox
Jackie
what I like most is you can't tell where i write and where u write.
I mean it seems to me it just blends as one in unison!@
loves you Tanya! Thanks for the Halloween fun this year!
hope to write more with you soon!
Mwah!
loves you sisxoxoxoxox
Jackie
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
Anonymous
26th Oct 2015 5:59pm
You Two,
awesome spell and perfect wand! ;-) Loved your lines:
"Secrets and hush tones
a laureate minx
soft pink words,
written in light blue ink."
tornado
awesome spell and perfect wand! ;-) Loved your lines:
"Secrets and hush tones
a laureate minx
soft pink words,
written in light blue ink."
tornado

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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
26th Oct 2015 8:28pm
Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
26th Oct 2015 8:44pm
I've read this multiple times and can't say with certainty who wrote which (witch?) lines, but this really flows, casts a potent spell.
"Cornerstone remedies
secret rendezvous,
my witches brew
I breathe into you...."
This is charming in every sense of the word. You use words like "cornerstone" to very evocative effect.
"Smoldering to inhale
your ecstasy,
blowing grape hearts and smoke rings..
I wanna wear you in dark tangle..
deep and mutually."
The "dark tangle" is perhaps a sisters' weave, resilient and strong. The "mutually" assures this. And the ecstasy comes in many dark forms. You really stir my imagination, Tanya and Jackie. Beautifully crafted work!
"Cornerstone remedies
secret rendezvous,
my witches brew
I breathe into you...."
This is charming in every sense of the word. You use words like "cornerstone" to very evocative effect.
"Smoldering to inhale
your ecstasy,
blowing grape hearts and smoke rings..
I wanna wear you in dark tangle..
deep and mutually."
The "dark tangle" is perhaps a sisters' weave, resilient and strong. The "mutually" assures this. And the ecstasy comes in many dark forms. You really stir my imagination, Tanya and Jackie. Beautifully crafted work!
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
26th Oct 2015 10:01pm
lovely d~ and Jackie I'm completely bewitched by the two of you :)
lines like this really brought me into the season of spell casting..
"Secrets and hush tones
a laureate minx
soft pink words,
written in light blue ink.
Cornerstone remedies
secret rendezvous,
my witches brew
I breathe into you...."
the whole poem is stunning take a bow the two of you :)
love Brenda
lines like this really brought me into the season of spell casting..
"Secrets and hush tones
a laureate minx
soft pink words,
written in light blue ink.
Cornerstone remedies
secret rendezvous,
my witches brew
I breathe into you...."
the whole poem is stunning take a bow the two of you :)
love Brenda
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
Dark is having pc issues :( I just wanna say it was so much fun writing this with her!
Thanks everyone for your kind words and support xoxoxox
Zazzles
Thanks everyone for your kind words and support xoxoxox
Zazzles
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
Anonymous
26th Oct 2015 11:05pm
A wonderful, sensuous trip down the road of passion and honesty,
is the poem, and it has given me a calmness even though this day
has been on very bad day!
is the poem, and it has given me a calmness even though this day
has been on very bad day!

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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
27th Oct 2015 00:59am
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
27th Oct 2015 4:20am
Very enchanting write, seamless.
Two minds writing flawlessly as one.
I loved this line, don't really know who gets the credit and I mean that as a compliment.
" wanna wear you in dark tangle..
deep and mutually. "
Thank you sweet ladies for this treat.
Keith
Two minds writing flawlessly as one.
I loved this line, don't really know who gets the credit and I mean that as a compliment.
" wanna wear you in dark tangle..
deep and mutually. "
Thank you sweet ladies for this treat.
Keith
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
27th Oct 2015 8:34pm
Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
Sara good from the Crucible...you cleva lil witches
Givin you higz n cussez
Grape heart smoke rings gottsta be mih gal tanya!
"Im not afraid,
I have a bathroom towel for a cape
a straw broom and a peppermint candy stick
for a wand.
an Enchantment charm,
really any spell will do
I wanna make you mine
my erotic JuJu....."
Dark T i ju ju'd for you...lit a black candle forya! Danced around it naked...i know you dont have to do that.....
Was just for fun till the cops were called ooops! Then i showed himyour gorgeous pic n he joined in and called for naked back up..me n the boyz in only blue ballz danced round your candle till one asked wrhy? And i said. Cuz im gettin a kick outta ya flappin dicks..lmao!!!! Seriously..tje poem is so cool..personal and special!!
Zazzles didnt know ya well befote...but if ypu make mih gal T grin...you gotta big place in mih heart.
Thanks T for talkin with mih this week been outta mih skull crazy with grief and you make me smile.
I love this piece!
Always love your ink.
I adore and give big smooches alllllllll
Ovvvva ya mih darlin treasured gal.
Ypu are so dear to mih.
)love
Calamity of Jennifer
Givin you higz n cussez
Grape heart smoke rings gottsta be mih gal tanya!
"Im not afraid,
I have a bathroom towel for a cape
a straw broom and a peppermint candy stick
for a wand.
an Enchantment charm,
really any spell will do
I wanna make you mine
my erotic JuJu....."
Dark T i ju ju'd for you...lit a black candle forya! Danced around it naked...i know you dont have to do that.....
Was just for fun till the cops were called ooops! Then i showed himyour gorgeous pic n he joined in and called for naked back up..me n the boyz in only blue ballz danced round your candle till one asked wrhy? And i said. Cuz im gettin a kick outta ya flappin dicks..lmao!!!! Seriously..tje poem is so cool..personal and special!!
Zazzles didnt know ya well befote...but if ypu make mih gal T grin...you gotta big place in mih heart.
Thanks T for talkin with mih this week been outta mih skull crazy with grief and you make me smile.
I love this piece!
Always love your ink.
I adore and give big smooches alllllllll
Ovvvva ya mih darlin treasured gal.
Ypu are so dear to mih.
)love
Calamity of Jennifer
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
28th Oct 2015 1:49pm
Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
28th Oct 2015 11:07pm
Mmmmm yea as great as the first time I read it! lol two thumbs up my dark one :)
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Re. Sarah Good, Darksighs and Broom [written w/my lovely Zazzles!!]
5th Nov 2015 11:58pm
love this piece my bday is the day after halloween so this really caught my attention a brilliant read as always hugs
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