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Word Weavers
a plunging plume I settle,
to witness
the weaver of words
consume a kettle,
and feast on the thickness
of ingredients served
words of wire,
entangle and ensnare
my imagination
I admire
the spangle and glare,
of their illumination
of violet vowels,
and the complexion
of their consonants
creating isles,
of connection
that transmit consummate
reflections
of the spirit,
the mystique of the mind
as sections
of threaded lyrics,
uniquely unwind
unveiling the
incense of sorrows,
or dreams of pearl
retelling their
pasts, present,
or tomorrow’s world
as they blow
through whistles and horns,
with notes of oil
while they grow
by thistles and thorns,
with quotes from soil
leaking rivers
of emotions,
that flow from spigots
speaking slivers
of potions,
to buy my ticket...
to witness
the weaver of words
consume a kettle,
and feast on the thickness
of ingredients served
words of wire,
entangle and ensnare
my imagination
I admire
the spangle and glare,
of their illumination
of violet vowels,
and the complexion
of their consonants
creating isles,
of connection
that transmit consummate
reflections
of the spirit,
the mystique of the mind
as sections
of threaded lyrics,
uniquely unwind
unveiling the
incense of sorrows,
or dreams of pearl
retelling their
pasts, present,
or tomorrow’s world
as they blow
through whistles and horns,
with notes of oil
while they grow
by thistles and thorns,
with quotes from soil
leaking rivers
of emotions,
that flow from spigots
speaking slivers
of potions,
to buy my ticket...
Published 21st Oct 2015
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21st Oct 2015 8:37pm
21st Oct 2015 9:03pm
thanx Sammy, flattered by by your comments and the RL, i just tried to convey my feelings about the amazing artists i read(including yours), glad you could stop by...
Anonymous
21st Oct 2015 9:29pm
WoW! Word Weavers indeed!
i admired your rhyming scheme.
Yep, this poem worked for me!
i admired your rhyming scheme.
Yep, this poem worked for me!
22nd Oct 2015 5:35pm
21st Oct 2015 10:09pm
Dean you are definitely a word weaver I admire greatly..
love the magic of this write..
love Crim
love the magic of this write..
love Crim
22nd Oct 2015 5:37pm
21st Oct 2015 10:22pm
Fantastic writing and word usage complemented by great flow and cool rhymes. I really liked being able to feel your captivation with words of others, I got pulled straight into the emotionality of that. Well conveyed, enjoyed this very much!
22nd Oct 2015 5:41pm
thanx for reading WH, pleased that you were able to pick up the impressions i tried to convey, thanx for the glowing comments...
Oh Dean...i really like this!!
These lovely words flow seamless one verse to
Next how they jump in to one another in rhyme and thought..
👆Lol poor example on mih part.
But you get mih drift
And this does like snow into another bank..
Cozy words and images doll
Rl spot for you to be savored by me and i do devour this delicious kettle of poetry.
Had to come back and add, i just saw on Scooters poem about Poe that you havent read a lot of poetry..have to say im surprised.. You sure have command of it. Some think Rhyme is easier and less somehow than free verse..i disagree..feel rhyme is much harder to do well..sweet you do it superbly!
And yes, pick up Poe..start with his standard the Raven..he mixes Rhyme and short story in heart thumping ways..then A tale tell heart by him...kudos to you darlin!
Love
Jennifer
These lovely words flow seamless one verse to
Next how they jump in to one another in rhyme and thought..
👆Lol poor example on mih part.
But you get mih drift
And this does like snow into another bank..
Cozy words and images doll
Rl spot for you to be savored by me and i do devour this delicious kettle of poetry.
Had to come back and add, i just saw on Scooters poem about Poe that you havent read a lot of poetry..have to say im surprised.. You sure have command of it. Some think Rhyme is easier and less somehow than free verse..i disagree..feel rhyme is much harder to do well..sweet you do it superbly!
And yes, pick up Poe..start with his standard the Raven..he mixes Rhyme and short story in heart thumping ways..then A tale tell heart by him...kudos to you darlin!
Love
Jennifer
22nd Oct 2015 5:46pm
hey Gin, your comments brighten my corona, yeah there are a few poets i have to read when i get time, i shall take your advice about poe, rhymes are like spells to me, non-rhyming poetry gives you more freedom though, thanx for commenting southern belle...
22nd Oct 2015 3:29am
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22nd Oct 2015 6:30pm
22nd Oct 2015 7:08pm
im grateful for your radiant comments Rain... so beautiful i think im going to go somewhere and cry... lol...
24th Oct 2015 2:18am
24th Oct 2015 6:31pm
your comments make my chakras spill, ive just gotten a chance to read a few of your poems, santa has placed numerous presents under your tree of artistry babygirl...
21st Nov 2015 7:28pm
"violet vowels"....I love that! So many wonderful images here, and great rhythm too. Nice!
24th Nov 2015 9:03pm
